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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that world is facing today. What are cause and effects of global warming?

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that world is facing today. What are cause and effects of global warming? V0277
Human activities such as Fossil fuel, Deforestration, Intensive farming, Mining and waste disposal are very like main cause of global warming. The massive use of fossil fuel is obviously first source of global warming, as burning coal, oil and gas produce carbon dioxide- the most important greenhouse gas in the atmosphere. In addition to fossil fuel, Deforestration also contributes to the global warming. Tree absorb carbon dioxide which eminates from burning of fossil fuel and release oxygen. When tree cut down, this positive effect is lost and the carbon stored in the trees is released in the atmosphere. Human are facing new challenges for survival of the climate change. Raising sea level and floods are causing population of migration. The estimate number of climate refugees by 2050 is 250 million people. In addition to climate change, global warming has been accomplised by a decrease in vey cold days and nights and an increase in extreamly hot days and warm nights. If the issue of global warming not resolved then we may face catastrophic events such as floods and hurricanes frequently and will also make human beings more vulnerable to deadly diseas. In conclusion, while it is true that global warming main problem for world wide, However, People and goverment have to find alertenative option rather than fossil fuel, Also they need to plant tree at least once in year.
Human activities such as
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Fossil
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fuel
,
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Deforestration
, Intensive farming, Mining and waste disposal are
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very
like main cause of
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global
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warming
. The massive
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use
of
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fossil
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fuel
is
obviously
first
source of
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global
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warming
, as burning coal, oil and gas produce carbon dioxide- the most
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important
greenhouse gas in the atmosphere.
In addition
to
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fossil
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fuel
,
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Deforestration
also
contributes to the
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global
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warming
.
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Tree
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absorb
carbon dioxide which
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eminates
from burning of
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fossil
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fuel
and release oxygen. When
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tree
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cut
down, this
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positive
effect
is lost
and the carbon stored in the
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trees
is released
in the atmosphere.

Human are facing new challenges for survival of the climate
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change
. Raising sea level and floods are causing population of migration. The estimate number of
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climate


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refugees
by 2050 is 250 million
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people
.
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to climate
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change
,
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global
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warming
has been
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accomplised
by a decrease in
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vey
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cold
days and nights and an increase

in
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extreamly
hot days and warm nights. If the issue of
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global
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warming
not resolved then we may face catastrophic
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events
such as floods and hurricanes
frequently
and

will
also
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make
human beings more vulnerable to deadly
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diseas
.

In conclusion
, while it is true that
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main problem for
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world wide
,
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,
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and
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goverment
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find
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alertenative
option
rather
than
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they need to plant
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at least once in year.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issues that world is facing today. What are cause and effects of global warming?

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