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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. what are the causes of Global Warming and what measures can Governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. what are the causes of Global Warming and what measures can Governments and individuals take to tackle the issue? gpyd
Global warming is one of the serious problem for mankind, which will perhaps engulf humanity in near future. This essay will analyse the reason and fact behind the global warming and will try to give some suggestions to overcome this daunting issue. First and foremost, I would like to commence by stating numerable aspects related global warming. Global warming is one type of phenomena of gases such as carbon dioxide which will trap the heat from Sun which causes Global temperature is rising. secondly, This days human beings used excessive amount of fossil fuels in industries which was harmful for environment because this type of fuel generates different kind of gases which will depleting ozone layer and it is not good for human being also. Apart from this, many things are responsible for global warming, such as deforestation, using of air conditioning, using aeroplanes on a daily basis. Conversely, Every problem has a solution. To mitigate this problem people have to use renewable energy resources such as solar energy and wind energy. Moreover, Government have to educate masses about detrimental effects associated with global warming and government also have to promote sustainable energy and reduce the taxes of industry who used green energy. Although, people have to understand their social responsibility towards environment and stop using non conventional resources which is not for friendly for the environment. In final analysis, I would like to firmly assert that, global warming a threat for mankind. However, we can eradicate this issue by taking some deligent steps. Otherwise a day will when we will repent on our actions.
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is one of the serious problem for mankind, which will perhaps engulf humanity in near future. This essay will
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analyse
the reason and fact behind the
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global
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warming
and will try to give
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some
suggestions to overcome this daunting issue.

First
and foremost, I would like to commence by stating numerable aspects related
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global
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warming
.
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Global
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warming
is one type of phenomena of gases such as carbon dioxide which will trap the heat from Sun which causes
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temperature is rising.
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secondly
,
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This days
human beings
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used
excessive amount of fossil fuels in industries which was harmful for environment
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because
this type of fuel generates
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different
kind of gases which will depleting ozone layer and it is not
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good
for human being
also
. Apart from this,
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things are responsible for
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global
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, such as deforestation, using of air conditioning, using
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aeroplanes
on a daily basis.

Conversely
, Every problem has a solution. To mitigate this problem
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people
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have to
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use
renewable
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resources such as solar
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energy
and wind
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energy
.
Moreover
,
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Government
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have
to educate masses about detrimental effects associated with
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and
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also
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have to
promote sustainable
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energy
and
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reduce
the taxes of industry who
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used
green
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energy
. Although,
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people
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have to
understand their social responsibility towards environment and
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stop
using
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non conventional
resources which is not for friendly for the environment.

In final analysis, I would like to
firmly
assert that,
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global
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warming
a threat for mankind.
However
, we can eradicate this issue by taking
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some
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steps.
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a day will when we will repent on our actions.
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IELTS essay Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. what are the causes of Global Warming and what measures can Governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

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4 paragraphs
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