The global warming became one of the most important problems caused by human activities in 21 century's. The main reason why humanity pays attention to that is that sea levels will rise more if humanity didn't start to search for the solution of that problem.
One of the first problems of global warming is the rising of sea level became a dangerous disaster to the cities that are located on the coasts of the sea. For example, the Venetian cities oftenly go under the water because of abnormal rises of the sea level. This disaster cause a lot of destruction to a buildings and disturb logistic systems of a cities. Another major problem is the growing temperature and the problems that it cause. Temperature rises all over the world, and this result a abnormal climate changes in different parts of the world and cause melting of glaciers.
It is important that action is taken to combat these problems. Governments of all countries should accept an agreement on reducing the quantity of usage of the fossil fuels. Industrialist of different worldwide companies should also be included in the solution of that problem. They need to develop a new methods of producing the resources which will be more "nature" friendly, such as new filters that can reduce the pollution from smoke, replacing a fossil fuel to a renewable electricity like windmills and dams.
To conclude, global warming became a consequence of human inattention to the environment, and that consequence can cause a large amount of global problems that can threat a whole humanity to collapse. However, if humankind will take the right actions it can easily prevent the deterioration
The
global
warming became one of the most
important
problems
caused by human activities in
21 century
's. The main reason why humanity pays attention to
that is
that
sea
levels will rise more if humanity didn't
start
to search for the solution of that problem.
One of the
first
problems
of
global
warming is the rising of
sea
level became a
dangerous
disaster to the cities that
are located
on the coasts of the
sea
.
For example
, the Venetian cities
oftenly
go under the water
because
of abnormal rises of the
sea
level. This disaster
cause
a lot of
destruction to a buildings and disturb logistic systems of
a cities
. Another major
problem
is the growing temperature and the
problems
that it
cause
. Temperature rises all over the world, and this result
a
abnormal climate
changes
in
different
parts of the world and
cause
melting of glaciers.
It is
important
that action
is taken
to combat these
problems
.
Governments
of all countries should accept an agreement on reducing the quantity of usage of the fossil fuels. Industrialist of
different
worldwide
companies
should
also
be included
in the solution of that
problem
. They need to develop a new
methods
of producing the resources which will be more
"
nature
"
friendly, such as new filters that can
reduce
the pollution from smoke, replacing a fossil fuel to a renewable electricity like windmills and dams.
To conclude
,
global
warming became a consequence of human inattention to the environment, and that consequence can
cause
a large amount of
global
problems
that can threat a whole humanity to collapse.
However
, if humankind will take the right actions it can
easily
prevent
the deterioration
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