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global warming become biggest issue for environmental. what are causes and how it can be solved. 2PlnA
In the current scenario, several lifestyle changes have been adopted by humans for the shake of comfort which increases global warming due to change in the environment are held responsible for this occurrence which needs to be addressed immediately to tour time it. To commence, several factors are responsible for global warming. Firstly rising greenhouse gases in the environment lead to many toxic gases such as carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide Secondly, not only pollution released from factories but also deforestation are the main reasons for the increase in global warming illustrate Industrialization and vehicles emit toxic fumes which produce a huge amount of pollution. However, but to establish humans which leads to logging of trees in agriculture farmers do stubble burning which also surges the temperature of the h. Lastly, advancements in technology and luxurious items such as air conditioning release toxic gas. On the contrary, despite having critical issues it can be mitigated by several steps. Primarily global warming cannot be decreased and unless humans adopt sustainable development. Moreover, no doubt life is not possible without petrol transports but it is the responsibility of the masses to use it in a limited way which can help to eradicate global warming. Similarly, this problem can be solved by only humans participating in afforestation to grow more trees which can protect from greenhouse gases which are the biggest reason for the increase in global warming. Furthermore, it is the social responsibility of human beings to contribute to the protection of the earth by organising awareness programs. Lastly, toxic fumes which made from industrialisation they have to take some steps to co-operate with this problem. In conclusion, global warming has many drastic consequences which can be eliminated only global power come together to work in tandem. however, small steps can help to decrease global warming in the environment.
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scenario, several lifestyle
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changes
have
been adopted
by
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humans
for the shake of comfort which increases
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global
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warming
due to
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change
in the environment
are held
responsible for this occurrence which needs to
be addressed
immediately to tour time it.

To commence, several factors are responsible for
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global
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warming
.
Firstly
rising greenhouse gases in the environment lead to
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many
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toxic
gases such as carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide
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, not
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only
pollution released from factories
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but
also
deforestation are the main reasons for the increase in
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global
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warming
illustrate Industrialization and vehicles emit
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toxic
fumes which produce a huge amount of pollution.
However
,
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but
to establish
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humans
which leads to logging of trees in agriculture farmers do stubble burning which
also
surges the temperature of the h.
Lastly
, advancements in technology and luxurious items such as air conditioning release
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toxic
gas.

On the contrary
, despite having critical issues it can
be mitigated
by several steps.
Primarily
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global
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warming
cannot
be decreased
and unless
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humans
adopt sustainable development.
Moreover
, no doubt life is not possible without petrol transports
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but
it is the responsibility of the masses to
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use
it
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in a limited way
which can
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help
to eradicate
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global
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warming
.
Similarly
, this problem can
be solved
by
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only
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humans
participating in afforestation to grow more trees which can protect from greenhouse gases which are the biggest reason for the increase in
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global
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warming
.
Furthermore
, it is the social responsibility of
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human
beings to contribute to the protection of the earth by
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organising
awareness programs.
Lastly
,
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toxic
fumes which made from
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industrialisation
they
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have to
take
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some
steps to co-operate with this problem.

In conclusion
,
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global
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warming
has
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many
drastic consequences which can
be eliminated
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only
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global
power
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come
together to work in tandem.
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however
,
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small
steps can
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help
to decrease
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global
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warming
in the environment.
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IELTS essay global warming become biggest issue for environmental. what are causes and how it can be solved.

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4 paragraphs
307 words
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