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Give your thoughts on transporting fruit from the local to the city

Give your thoughts on transporting fruit from the local to the city e3pyV
in this day, the delivery for jobs for foods from other areas is becoming more development than it did ever. In contrast with this improvement, personally I think consuming local foods brings positive influences on environment There are wide range of reason why foods are shipped far away. Firstly, people sometimes have a demand to eat fruits that is out of reason or maybe not in their places, So food imports provide a large choices for customers. On the other hand, the huge problem is environmental issues. The transtation of food would require a huge amont of fuel so this is dementrial to environment. By shipping food miles, we are degradingly harming to our world. Another neagtive impact of shipping food is using chemicals by sellers in order to keep food in a best condition. By this way, buyer can not ensure the safety and nution of food In conclusion, taking advantages of local food brings improrement on environment I think that idea of eating local foods should be encouraged
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in
this day, the delivery for jobs for
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foods
from other areas is becoming more development than it did ever.
In contrast
with this improvement,
personally
I
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think
consuming local
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foods
brings
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positive
influences on
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environment


There are wide range of reason why
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foods
are shipped
far away.
Firstly
,
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people
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sometimes
have a demand to eat fruits
that is
out of reason or maybe not in their places,
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So
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food
imports provide a large
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choices
for customers.

On the other hand
, the huge problem is environmental issues. The
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transtation
of
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food
would require a huge
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amont
of fuel
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so
this is
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dementrial
to environment. By shipping
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food
miles, we are
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degradingly
harming to our world. Another
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neagtive
impact of shipping
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food
is using chemicals by sellers in order to
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keep
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food
in
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a
best condition. By this way, buyer can not ensure the safety and
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nution
of
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food


In conclusion
, taking advantages of local
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food
brings
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improrement
on environment I
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think
that
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idea
of eating local
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foods
should
be encouraged

IELTS essay Give your thoughts on transporting fruit from the local to the city

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
169 words
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