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Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn’t have any effect of his bad neighbourhood.

Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn’t have any effect of his bad neighbourhood. 3aW1d
The effect of bad neighbourhood on a person's accomplishment, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of bad neighbourhood on person's accomplishment has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the achievement of one's success over the years. It can be said that eventually, unwanted neighbourhood, difficult circumstances, inevitable situations never impact the underlying belief of becoming successful. This essay will elaborate how bad neighbourhood inspired him to become successful and how it educated him to deal with the hardship. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why bad neighbourhood didn't impact on one's success, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that person has been influenced positively by the bad elements of the society and sorrows and sufferings, which his neighourhood endured, have stimulated his personality to avoid the similar destiny by achieving success in life. For example, person resided in a neighbourhood where jail term was inevitable due to drug dealings, however, these inspired him to take a different path to avoid the same fate Another key justification for upholding this notion is that person learnt how to deal with the hardship of life while living in the corrupt neighbourhood which in turns created a strong personality to deal with the similar situations in life, but it also paved the way for him to become accomplished. For example, not only was he moved by the poverty and how it can lead to crime, but also learnt how hard work can help to avoid wrong doings and help him earn money. From what has been discussed above, it can be said that the impact of bad neighbourhood on success was prominent, and the way it prepares him for the difficulties.
The effect of
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bad
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on a person's accomplishment, which was always debatable, has
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now
become more controversial. The substantial influence of
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bad
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neighbourhood
on person's accomplishment has sparked the controversy over the potential
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impact
of this trend on the achievement of one's
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success
over the years. It can
be said
that
eventually
, unwanted
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neighbourhood
, difficult circumstances, inevitable situations never
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impact
the underlying belief of becoming successful. This essay will elaborate how
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bad
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neighbourhood
inspired him to become successful and how it educated him to deal with the hardship.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why
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bad
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neighbourhood
didn't
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impact
on one's
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success
,
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but
the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that person has
been influenced
positively
by the
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bad
elements of the society and sorrows and sufferings, which his
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neighourhood
endured, have stimulated his personality to avoid the similar destiny by achieving
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success
in life.
For example
, person resided in a
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neighbourhood
where jail term was inevitable due to drug dealings,
however
, these inspired him to take a
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different
path to avoid the same
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fate


Another key justification for upholding this notion is that person
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learnt
how to deal with the hardship of life while living in the corrupt
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neighbourhood
which in turns created a strong personality to deal with the similar situations in life,
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but
it
also
paved the way for him to become accomplished.
For example
, not
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only
was he
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moved
by the poverty and how it can lead to crime,
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but
also
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learnt
how
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hard
work can
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help
to avoid
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wrong
doings and
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help
him earn money.

From what has
been discussed
above, it can
be said
that the
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impact
of
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neighbourhood
on
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success
was prominent, and the way it prepares him for the difficulties.
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IELTS essay Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn’t have any effect of his bad neighbourhood.

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4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
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