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Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting that from your peers.

Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting that from your peers. 15m3A

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IELTS essay Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting that from your peers.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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