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Garbage produced by our cities is a big problem for government around the World. How can this problem be fixed?

Nowadays, public authorities are facing a lot of problems but the major issue that the government around the Globe facing is the number of waste material produced by citizens. The essay will discuss the solution that could be used to tackle this problem. Firstly, decomposing the garbage is one of the dominant solution to this problem, owing to that, individual use the techniques such as burning the waste, internment the garbage along with many others, for decomposing the waste, whereas, these methods leaves a hazardous effect on the environment as well human being. Instead, of using aforementioned ways people should use the R3 technique (Reduce, Reuse, Recycle). Moreover Garba should also be decreased if government aware the citizens regarding the disease born in the dump of waste material along with the method that could be used to minimise the amount of garbage. Furthermore, dumpyard manufacture is one is another solution that could be used to handle the problem of waste material, reason being, currently, people throw the garbage everywhere which is the main cause of this problem whereas, if government build the dump yard then people should throw the garbage on the single place. Along with, dump yard also have numerous of machines which decay the garbage of the city. For example, according to the newspaper the globe in India 60% of garbage is recycled every year and this proportion is increasing daily. Ergo, if each government use this way to handle this problem then the percentage of waste material could decrease rapidly. Conclusion, nature friendly techniques for decay of garbage, appropriate place for the waste material are the crucial step that out to be taken to solve the problem that the higher authorities of country are facing.
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a lot of
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problems
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but
the major issue that the
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government
around the Globe facing is the number of
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waste
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material
produced by citizens. The essay will discuss the solution that could be
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used
to tackle this problem.

Firstly
, decomposing the garbage is one of the dominant solution to this
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problem
, owing to that, individual
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use
the techniques such as burning the
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waste
, internment the garbage along with
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many
others, for decomposing the
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waste
, whereas, these methods
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leaves
a hazardous effect on the environment
as well
human being.
Instead
, of using aforementioned ways
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people
should
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use
the R3 technique (
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Reduce
, Reuse, Recycle).
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Moreover
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should
also
be decreased
if
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government
aware the citizens regarding the disease born in the dump of
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waste
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material
along with the method that could be
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used
to
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minimise
the amount of garbage.

Furthermore
,
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dumpyard
manufacture is one is another solution that could be
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used
to handle the
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of
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waste
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material
, reason being,
currently
,
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people
throw the garbage everywhere which is the main cause of this
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problem
whereas, if
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government
build the dump yard then
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people
should throw the garbage on the single place. Along with, dump yard
also
have numerous of machines which decay the garbage of the city.
For example
, according to the newspaper the globe in India 60% of garbage
is recycled
every year and this proportion is increasing daily. Ergo, if each
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government
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use
this way to handle this
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problem
then the percentage of
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waste
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material
could decrease
rapidly
.

Conclusion, nature friendly techniques for decay of garbage, appropriate place for the
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waste
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material
are the crucial step that out to
be taken
to solve the
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problem
that the higher authorities of country are facing.
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IELTS essay Garbage produced by our cities is a big problem for government around the World. How can this problem be fixed?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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