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Gap years are an important experience. Do you agree or disagree

Gap years are an important experience. 9QpAn

Gap year is a time after graduating from high school, some student tend to get a job or go on a trip before going to university. For me there are an important experience and I agree with that opinion Firstly, working and traveling are both good chances for me to gain some some valuable experience. If i have chance, i will traveled to London during my gap year. By spending time in London, i have opportunity to improve my English skills like hear, speak, read and write. Secondly taking a year out help me control my study and carre future, i can do varios jobs without long-term commitment in this time, and discover what might be right for me In conclusion, i believe that gap years are an important experience for me or other graduate student who start working or traveling prior to beginning our university life

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year
 is a time after graduating from high school, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "students"?students
student
 tend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a job or go on a

trip This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going to university. For me there are an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 experience and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with that

Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphopinion.opinion!opinion?opinion:opinion,opinion;
opinion


Firstly
, working and traveling are both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 chances for me to gain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 valuable

experience. If Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have chance, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "travel"travel
traveled
 to London during my gap You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. By spending time in

London, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 my English This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 like hear, speak, read and write. Secondly


taking a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 out This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me control my study and Possible spelling mistake found.carecarryCarrCarriecadrecarve
carre
 future, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can do Possible spelling mistake found.variousvaries
varios
 jobs without

long-term commitment in this time, and discover what might be right for Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphme.me!me?me:me,me;
me


In conclusion
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 believe that gap years are an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 experience for me or other graduate

student who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working or traveling prior to beginning our university life