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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Fossil fuels (coal, oil and natural gas) are the main sources in many countries. However, in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? v. 2
While non renewable resources like coal, oil are main source of energy in the world, but in some countries the use of renewable resources like wind, water are encouraged. In my opinion this is a positive trend. Firstly, it takes thousands of years to make fossil fuels and it is being used at alarming rate. That means there will be nothing left for us to use as fuel in future. Secondly the renewable sources are more helpful to environment as it is pollution free. However, burning oil and natural gas is are considered to be main reason for greenhouse effect. In addition to, by using renewable resources our country can produce its own energy which results 2 yes Sir import of no renewable resources from foreign lands. Another benefit could be, do you see sources cost less maintenance caused as its no need of heavy machinery to extract fuels from ground. Although, renewable resources are great for us and for environment also, it is considered to very costly to establish solar plant or windmills and amount of energy is completely depended on weather. In conclusion, positions are available for a limited time period and also considerd to be threat to environment. Even though projects like solar plant are considered costly, it will always be a positive development for the country to use it.
While non
renewable
resources like coal, oil are main source of energy in the world,
but
in
some
countries the
use
of
renewable
resources like wind, water
are encouraged
. In my opinion this is a
positive
trend.

Firstly
, it takes thousands of years to
make
fossil fuels and it is being
used
at alarming rate. That means there will be nothing
left
for us to
use
as fuel
in future
.
Secondly
the
renewable
sources are more helpful to environment as it is pollution free.
However
, burning oil and natural gas is
are considered
to be main reason for greenhouse effect.

In addition
to, by using
renewable
resources our country can produce its
own
energy which results 2 yes Sir import of no
renewable
resources from foreign lands. Another benefit could be, do you
see
sources cost less maintenance caused as its no need of heavy machinery to extract fuels from ground. Although,
renewable
resources are great for us and for environment
also
, it
is considered
to
very
costly to establish solar plant or windmills and amount of energy is completely depended on weather.

In conclusion
, positions are available for a limited time period and
also
considerd
to be threat to environment.
Even though
projects like solar plant
are considered
costly, it will always be a
positive
development for the country to
use
it.
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IELTS letter Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged.

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