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More and more people belive that in near days they will be able to find everything they want online. Is this possible? Everything like newspapers and books for free. May be some of these readings but not all of it. I don't belive the good scenario and best characters will be made for free, who will invest his time as a most expensive thing we all have for something that doesn't lead to a profit? There will be no stimulfor the writers. More ever even the specialist behind that big industry, like print services will be left with no job. Who is going to pay for the translation of these stories, how this system is going to functioning without the source of money? On the other hand, news and these kind of mediawill be faster and more accurate because they can issue the news straight away and change it on fly, if something is not presented the corect way. Even more not printing hundrets of thousands copies everyday will be great for the enviroment of the beautifull planet we live on. Offcourse the best thing for the reader like me will be not only that the books and stories will be for free but also you can have it right now, laying on the bed In conclusion, I would say: I don't belive that everything in that statement is possible, but most of it will happen. Buying books online, reading news for free right after they are issued, also maybe we are going to have them even thrue notifications on our phones based on our location and interests. Most of it is allreasy here in nowdays.
More and more
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people
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belive
that in near days they will be able to find everything they want online.

Is this possible? Everything like newspapers and books for
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free
.
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?
May be
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some
of these readings
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but
not all of it.

I don't
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belive
the
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good
scenario and best characters will
be made
for
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free
, who will invest his time as a most expensive thing we all have for something that doesn't lead to a profit? There will be no
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stimulfor
the writers. More ever even the specialist behind that
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big
industry, like print services will be
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left
with no job. Who is going to pay for the translation of these stories, how this system is going to
It seems that a verb is missing in front of the adjective "functioning".
functioning
without the source of money?

On the other hand
, news and
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these kind
of
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mediawill
be faster and more accurate
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because
they can issue the news straight away and
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change
it on
fly
, if something is not presented the
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corect
way. Even more not printing
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hundrets
of thousands copies
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everyday
will be great for the
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enviroment
of the
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beautifull
planet we
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live
on.
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Offcourse
the best thing for the reader like me will be not
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only
that the books and stories will be for
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free
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
you can have it right
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now
, laying on the bed

In conclusion
, I would say:

I don't
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belive
that everything in that statement is possible,
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but
most of it will happen. Buying books online, reading news for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
right after they
are issued
,
also
maybe we are going to have them even
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thrue
notifications on our phones based on our location and interests. Most of it is
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allreasy
here in
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nowdays
.
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IELTS essay for and against free books

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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