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Food habit of USA people from 2003 to 2013

Food habit of USA people from 2003 to 2013 N3RWd
The information showed here talks about the junk food consumption at restaurant from 2003 to 2013 in the United States of America. The data give us the information about the frequency of food pattern in different timeline. In the lasts ten years, around 35% people eat out once in a week, or once or twice in a month. Eating out on daily basis in less than 5% and the percentage of never buying readymate food is less than five percent. The habit did not change for the last 10 years. Those who used to eat out once or twice in a week in 2003, they are still are maintaing the same condition. The number of people who used to eat once in a week in 2003, have changed the number into twice in a weeks or month in 2013. In recent years, trend of eating out has been changed. Some people hold the habit of eating in the restaurant like in 2006, who used to have outside food once or twice in a month has been increased in 2013. In conclusion, fast food consumption rate is always going up every year. This habit will have a greater impact on the overall food pattern of the society.
The information
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here talks about the junk
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food
consumption at restaurant from 2003 to 2013 in the United States of America. The data give us the information about the frequency of
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food
pattern in
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different
timeline.

In the lasts ten years, around 35%
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people
eat out
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once
in a
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week
, or
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once
or twice in a month. Eating out on daily basis in less than 5% and the percentage of never buying
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readymate
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food
is less than five percent. The habit did not
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change
for the last 10 years. Those who
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used
to eat out
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once
or twice in a
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week
in 2003, they are
still
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are
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maintaing
the same condition. The number of
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people
who
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used
to eat
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once
in a
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week
in 2003, have
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changed
the number into twice in a
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weeks
or month in 2013.

In recent years, trend of eating out has been
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changed
.
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Some
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people
hold the habit of eating in the restaurant like in 2006, who
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used
to have outside
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food
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once
or twice in a month has
been increased
in 2013.

In conclusion
,
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fast
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food
consumption rate is always going up every
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year
. This habit will have a greater impact on the
overall
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food
pattern of the society.
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IELTS essay Food habit of USA people from 2003 to 2013

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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