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First list the books you have read in the past year. Next, select one of the books that you found especially insightful. What did you learn from it, and would you recommend that other people read it as well?

First list the books you have read in the past year. Next, select one of the books that you found especially insightful. What did you learn from it, and would you recommend that other people read it as well? QK2DK
Books are an important part of every person's daily life. They give us knowledge which we can't even learn in schools. The books which I've read during 2021 are “Pride and Prejudice” by Jane Austen, “The Murder of Roger Ackroyd” by Agatha Christie, “The notebook” by Nicholas Sparks, “The three comrades” and “The black obelisk” by Erich Maria Remarque. These books are all very special to me, but the one which has really touched my heart is “The three comrades” by Remarque. Erich Maria Remarque is a very powerful novelist. I’ve planned to read all his novels after reading “The three comrades”. Personally I consider it as the most impressive book, which highlights in it the bright and dark sides of a person's life whose hopes and dreams die, who experiences everything good and bad in the world. For example, the loss of a friend, loss of a loved one, health issues which take lifes, life after war, the fight against society's opinion, the non working business, hopes concerning the future, dying dreams, unexpected meetings with the most important ones, etc. By starting the book, I felt really excited, imagined what would happen after, I even dreamt about it. But after reaching the end of the book I understood that I didn’t want to know what would happen afterwards, because I felt that the girl who was loved by the main character of the book, Patricia, was going to die. Of course she died and the cause was her health problems. But this was not the biggest loss. Robert, the main character, lost his closest friend, Lenz. A militant killed him. I was shocked by not the death of Lenz, but by the unemotional response to the death by Robert. What Robert felt was hidden and I guess now I've become like him, full of life, sociable, but also full of unexpressed emotions. They were three comrades, living not their best life, but enjoying every single detail in their life. In conclusion, after reading the book I started to value every particular thing in my life, every person, every meal which I eat, every minute of my time which I spend, my money, ets. This book taught me what a real friendship looks like, what support, love and care for each other is alike. I also learned about how the economic problems of the country can affect the low and middle classes of the population and how they fight for their survival. I would recommend everyone to read “The three comrades”, because it is a book of life, it’s a book of strength, dreams, love and real friendship. I wish for everyone to have the chance and the time to read this amazing book.
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part of every person's daily
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life
. They give us knowledge which

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books
which I've
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during 2021 are “Pride and

Prejudice” by Jane Austen, “The Murder of Roger
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” by Agatha Christie, “The

notebook” by Nicholas Sparks, “The three comrades” and “The black obelisk” by Erich

Maria Remarque. These
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books
are all
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very
special to me,
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really


touched my heart is “The three comrades” by Remarque.

Erich Maria Remarque is a
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very
powerful novelist. I’ve planned to
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read
all his novels

after reading “The three comrades”.
Personally
I consider it as the most impressive

book, which highlights in it the bright and dark sides of a person's
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life
whose hopes and

dreams
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die
, who experiences everything
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good
and
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bad
in the world.
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, the

loss of a friend, loss of a
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loved
one, health issues which take
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lifes
,
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life
after war, the fight

against society's opinion, the
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non working
business, hopes concerning the future, dying

dreams, unexpected meetings with the most
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important
ones, etc.

By starting the
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book
, I felt
really
excited, imagined what would happen after, I even

dreamt about it.
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But
after reaching the
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end
of the
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book
I understood that I didn’t want to

know what would happen afterwards,
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because
I felt that the girl who was
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loved
by the

main character of the
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book
, Patricia, was going to
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die
. Of
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course she
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died
and the cause

was her health problems.
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But
this was not the biggest loss. Robert, the main character,

lost his closest friend,
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Lenz
. A militant killed him. I
was shocked
by not the death of
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Lenz
,

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but
by the unemotional response to the death by Robert. What Robert felt
was hidden


and I guess
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now
I've become like him, full of
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life
, sociable,
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but
also
full of unexpressed

emotions. They were three comrades, living not their best
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life
,
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but
enjoying every single

detail in their life.

In conclusion
, after reading the
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book
I
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started
to value every particular thing in my life,

every person, every meal which I eat, every minute of my time which I spend, my money,

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ets
. This
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book
taught me what a real friendship looks like, what support,
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love
and care

for each other is alike. I
also
learned about how the economic problems of the country

can affect the low and middle classes of the population and how they fight for their

survival. I would recommend everyone to
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read
“The three comrades”,
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because
it is a

book of
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life
, it’s a
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book
of strength, dreams,
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love
and real friendship.
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I
wish for everyone

to have the chance and the time to
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this amazing
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IELTS essay First list the books you have read in the past year. Next, select one of the books that you found especially insightful. What did you learn from it, and would you recommend that other people read it as well?

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