Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Fast food has become more common in recent years. Some people think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets. Do you agree or disagree?

Fast food has become more common in recent years. Some people think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets. OrnlG
Food is one of the important factors in order to sustain a one's life. Hence, fast food establishments are becoming popular nowadays but a number of indivuduals claim that these has a bad impact on our daily life and diet. This essay, will argue how fast food can have a significant effect in lifestyle and diet, however, anything in excess is dangerous It is undeniably true that readily available source of food is necessary since life is passing fast today but this could lead to a dependency. People are getting used to the fact that almost everything is instant and easier access. However, if people will abuse this routine, it might result in a stagnant and unproductive lifestyle. It has been prominent as well that food delivery is widely accepted and practiced today due to pandemic. For instance, young generation prefer to buy food and spend their money in a fast food chain rather than cooking by themselves, resulting to laziness and inactive life routine. Quick-served food might as well harm one's health leading to serious illnesses. Fast food is considered to have a numerous sodium and saturated fats and is composed of processed products which is unsafe and unhealthy. As a result to this, a lot of people are getting diet-related health problems such as obesity, hypertension and diabetis mellitus, and is interconnected with a stagnant lifestyle. In the United States, heart attack is still the leading cause of death and the root factor of this is obesity. In addition to this, most Americans are adapted in consuming fast foods. If we will dig into this issue, the cause this problem is highly preventable and could be eradicated if everyone will be aware of the risks and consequences in taking numerous amount of fast foods. This essay arguably stated that although fast food chains are helpful in today's daily living, the risks still outweigh its benefits. I am completely propersterous that taking fast food in moderation is beneficial but overconsumption of it will lead into serious effect in our lifestyle and health.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Food
is one of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
factors in order to sustain a one's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
Hence
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
establishments are becoming popular nowadays
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
a

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
number
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
indivuduals
claim that
The verb 'has' is singular. Did you mean: "This has" or "these have", "these haven"?
these has
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
impact on our daily
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
and diet. This essay, will argue how
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
can have a significant effect

in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lifestyle
and diet,
however
, anything in excess is
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
dangerous


It is
undeniably
true that
readily
available source of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is necessary since
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
is passing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this could lead to a dependency.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
People
are getting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to the fact that almost everything is instant and easier access.
However
, if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
will abuse this routine, it might result in a

stagnant and unproductive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lifestyle
. It has been prominent
as well
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
delivery is
widely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
and practiced
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
due to

pandemic.
For instance
, young generation prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and spend their money in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
chain
rather
than cooking
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
by


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
themselves
, resulting to laziness and inactive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
routine.

Quick-served
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
might
as well
harm one's health leading to serious illnesses.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is considered
to have a numerous sodium and saturated fats and
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
is


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
composed
of processed products which is unsafe and unhealthy.
As a result
to this,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are getting diet-related health problems such as obesity,

hypertension and
Possible spelling mistake found.
diabetis
mellitus, and
is interconnected
with a stagnant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lifestyle
. In the United States, heart attack is
still
the leading cause of death

and the root factor of this is obesity.
In addition
to this, most Americans
are adapted
in consuming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
. If we
Consider removing 'will'. (Usually, 'will' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless in the sense 'want to' or 'be willing to'.)
will dig
into this issue, the cause

this problem is
highly
preventable and could
be eradicated
if everyone will be aware of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
and consequences in taking numerous amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
foods.

This essay
arguably
stated that although
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
chains are helpful in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's daily living, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
still
outweigh its benefits. I am completely

Possible spelling mistake found.
propersterous
that taking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fast
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
in moderation is beneficial
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
overconsumption of it will lead into serious effect in our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lifestyle
and health.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Fast food has become more common in recent years. Some people think that it has a negative effect on lifestyles and diets.

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
343 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts