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Family composition in today's world. Do you agree or disagree?

Family composition in today's world. 7a0l2
In earlt era there was a belive that family that stays together grows together, IN today’s modern trend people believe in nucelar family as the cost of living is compelled to shrink. Nuclear family is benefical for economic purpose where it believes less no of children helps in better parental attention and is able to give good educational opportunities and also lowers the level os stress. Due to having only a child parents become over protective and imposes restrictions on the child which makes it difficult for the child to socialize with people and explore the outer world, which could be a reason to develop unexpectable behaviour like being stuborn, undisciplined, over pampered and attention seekers, the psychological cobdition of the child is affected and the importance of family and family values are not known to the child. Therefore living in a small family can be more benefical for economic purpose regarless this trend is likely to continue as countries around tge world develops and become wealthier.
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earlt
era there was a
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belive
that
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family
that stays
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together grows together
, IN
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’s modern trend
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people
believe in
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nucelar
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family
as the cost of living
is compelled
to shrink.

Nuclear
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family
is
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benefical
for economic purpose where it believes less
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no
of children
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helps
in better parental attention and is able to give
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good
educational opportunities and
also
lowers the level
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os
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stress
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only
a
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child
parents become over protective and imposes restrictions on the
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child
which
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makes
it difficult for the
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child
to socialize with
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people
and explore the outer world, which could be a reason to develop
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unexpectable
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behaviour
like being
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stuborn
, undisciplined, over pampered and attention seekers, the psychological
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cobdition
of the
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child
is
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affected
and the importance of
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family
and
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family
values are not known to the child.

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living in a
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small
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family
can be more
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benefical
for economic purpose
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regarless
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world develops and become wealthier.
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IELTS essay Family composition in today's world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
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