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Internet is the thing that was not popular until 2006. The invention of the internet is the most stupendous innovation ever. For instance, people in the past used to walk to the library to find books, but with the Internet, you are given access to the abundant resources of knowledge and it is also available 24/7. Moreover, the Internet possess many crucial and useful function. One of them is mood changing, to be more specific, it helps you to release stress by listening to music and watching amusing videos. Before the invention, people had to collect old books and preserve them as carefully as they could, which was a serious drawback. Nowadays, the internet plays an indispensable part in our life, to the extent that our day-to-day lives are unimaginable without it. It is a big help for learners like us.
Internet is the thing that was not popular until 2006. The invention of the internet is the most stupendous innovation ever.
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with the Internet, you are
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access to the abundant resources of knowledge and it is
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crucial and useful function. One of them is mood changing, to be more specific, it
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helps
you to release
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stress
by listening to music and watching amusing videos.
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Before
the invention,
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people
had to collect
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old
books and preserve them as
carefully
as they could, which was a serious drawback. Nowadays, the internet plays an indispensable part in our life, to the extent that our day-to-day
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lives
are unimaginable without it. It is a
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big
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help
for learners like us.
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IELTS essay Facility that was not available 20 years ago

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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