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extreme sport should be banned or not

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It will be an exaggeration if I say, that I think extreme sport should not be banned because they learn how to keep calm under stress and improve skills. On my point of view, I want to say if practice d safely, extreme sports can be a great way to do physical exercise and relieve stress. For instance, if extreme sport member use equipment such as helmet and glove they will be protect injurers. Moreover I believe that it is wrong to prohibit extreme sports because when you work during 8 hours, you will be tired and exhausted instead of you must be sky diving and mountain biking. Finally, weigh out my view, every people have right enjoe the sports they are into whether their risky or not as they have free of choice. Every human beings think that challenging sports enable for many people release their own life pressure. Overall, in my opinion every human have a choice. If the person think that he need to extreme sports for adrenaline or entertainment it should not be banned.

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think
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extreme
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sport
 should not be banned
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because
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keep
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stress
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improve
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skills
.

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extreme
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sports
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stress
. For instance
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extreme
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sport
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protect
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wrong
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sports
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because
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 and exhausted instead
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must
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sky diving
 and mountain biking.

Finally
, weigh out my view, every This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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enjoe
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sports
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think
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sports
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many
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people
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own
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Overall
, in my opinion every human have a choice. If the person This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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extreme
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sports
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. 