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Explain your motivation for applying for Kyoto iUP and learning the Japanese language

Explain your motivation for applying for Kyoto iUP and learning the Japanese language Vwpyw

The rapid progress of Globalization in the past few years has made it a lot easier and difficult at the same time for people to connect. People turn into icons on screens rather than real humans. That unavoidable wave of loneliness intensified in the last two years due to the covid pandemic. This wave wasn't something I could surf through. I had lost a lot of my confidence and spunk in the last year. Once I realized that I knew something had to change. Later I stumbled upon Kyoto iUP, intrigued I began looking into it and the more I researched the more I found myself wanting to apply. I believe

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