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Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. What did you do, what was the outcome, and what did you learn from the experience.

Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. What did you do, what was the outcome, and what did you learn from the experience. jRVJp
An unexpected call has changed my monotonous summer. The biggest event in town “Tomujin is talking” granted me an opportunity to work as a coordinator. Starting with self-introductions, everything went smooth until project time. My teammates were timid and insecure to share their opinions and ideas. This had a detrimental effect on not only the project but our communication. I thought of an idea that would create a positive vibe in our team. Then I suggested playing mafia and everyone agreed with me. This game involves everyone and gets interesting when chasing the mafia. The more we played the closer we got. Thus, all of us felt comfortable with each other and we managed to create a warm environment. When we started concentrating on our project, brainstorm was more effective because everyone was snug and shared their ideas. This had improved my team’s productivity and helped us make our goals clear. From then on we have made a long lasting friendship, helping each other in need. In conclusion, I have learned a lifetime lesson that communication is the key to success. Venturing beyond the comfort zone helps particular team successfully accomplish tasks and get passionate about the thing they do.
An unexpected call has
changed
my monotonous summer. The biggest
event
in town “
Tomujin
is talking” granted me an opportunity to work as a coordinator. Starting with self-introductions, everything went smooth until project time. My teammates were timid and insecure to share their opinions and
ideas
. This had a detrimental effect on not
only
the project
but
our communication. I
thought
of an
idea
that would create a
positive
vibe in our team. Then I suggested playing mafia and everyone
agreed
with me. This game involves everyone and
gets
interesting when chasing the mafia. The more we played the closer we
got
.
Thus
, all of us felt comfortable with each
other and
we managed to create a warm environment. When we
started
concentrating on our project, brainstorm was more effective
because
everyone was snug and shared their
ideas
. This had
improved
my team’s productivity and
helped
us
make
our goals
clear
. From then on we have made a
long lasting
friendship, helping each other in need.
In conclusion
, I have learned a lifetime lesson that communication is the key to success. Venturing beyond the comfort zone
helps
particular team
successfully
accomplish tasks and
get
passionate about the thing they do.
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IELTS essay Explain how you responded to a problem and/or an unfamiliar situation. What did you do, what was the outcome, and what did you learn from the experience.

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