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experimneting on animals, are you agree or disagree

experimneting on animals, are you agree or disagree Wg1k0
It is not deniable that with the extent of industrial needs, experiments on animals have increased greatly and it has become one of the serious environmental communities concerns, and I believe there have been some movemenents in regard of(? ) complaining(? eteraz kardan) about this. In this essay I am going to discussed about whether this phenomenal is justified or not, and is there any alternative for this. Whether we like it or not great deal of our needs are provided by destroying wild life. It's not just about the experiments on animals, our food, clothes and big deal of livelihood is depends on animals and sacrificing their lives, this is just human nature. I am not saying that is fair for us to destroy some other creatures, what I am saying is that if we decide that is not justified for humans to overuse wildlife it should be implemented in larger scale. And since there has not been any movement toward this and it has not even been mentioned, at least not in big communities, there is no point of just forbidding animal experiments. If we care we should care truly. But are there any alternatives for animal experiments? It really depends on the usecase, in some cases it is possible to test a functionality of some inventions in other ways than experimenting on animals, but I believe sometimes this is not the case, and by not experimenting products on animals we are committing to sacrifice human lives instead. I believe and confirm that it is crucial to do experiments on animals without knowing what kind of results it might have on their lives and how difficult and painful it is going to be for them, but considering what I have mentioned in this essay, I think it is justified for the experiments that have no alternative test cases other than animals to experiment on them.
It is not deniable that with the extent of industrial needs,
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experiments
on
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animals
have increased
greatly
and it has become one of the serious environmental communities concerns, and I believe there have been
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some
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movemenents
in regard of(?
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)
complaining(?
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kardan
) about this. In this essay I am going to
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discussed about whether
this phenomenal
is justified
or not, and is there any alternative for this.

Whether we like it or not great deal of our needs
are provided
by destroying wild life. It's not
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just
about the
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experiments
on
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animals
, our food, clothes and
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big
deal of livelihood is depends on
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animals
and sacrificing their
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lives
, this is
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just
human nature. I am not saying
that is
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fair
for us to
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destroy
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some
other creatures, what I am saying is that if we decide
that is
not justified for humans to overuse wildlife it should
be implemented
in larger scale. And since there has not been any movement toward this and it has not even
been mentioned
, at least not in
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big
communities, there is no point of
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just
forbidding
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animal
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experiments
.
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If
we care we should care
truly
.

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are there any alternatives for
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animal
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? It
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usecase
, in
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some
cases it is possible to
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test
a functionality of
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some
inventions in other ways than experimenting on
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animals
,
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but
I believe
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sometimes
this is not the case, and by not experimenting products on
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animals
we are committing to sacrifice human
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lives
instead
.

I believe and confirm that it is crucial to do
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experiments
on
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animals
without knowing what kind of results it might have on their
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lives
and how difficult and painful it is going to be for them,
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but
considering what I have mentioned in this essay, I
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think
it
is justified
for the
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experiments
that have no alternative
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test
cases other than
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animals
to
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experiment
on them.
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IELTS essay experimneting on animals, are you agree or disagree

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4 paragraphs
317 words
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