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Excercise is important for everyones health do you agree or disagree.

Excercise is important for everyones health 78Ky

Exercise provides fit as well without diseases body. It plays paramount role in humans life. I agree with this statement and I will discuss my point in below sections. To commence with, there are numerous benefits for doing exercise daily. First and foremost point is control weight. Exercise is helpful for alleviate the weight of body due to the fact of some people are extremely heavy but if they are doing exercises in regular basis it will be beneficial for reducing their body also. Secondly, excercise provide without diseases body. Thus, it is good for long life. Further more, excercise gives certain kinds of energy for doing any work. However some times individual feel sad but after excercise they feel energetic. It also improve mood and boost up the energy levels of health. To conclude, although excercise is best for getting good health but nutritional diet is also significant for healthy body. Lastly excercise is better way of relaxation.

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