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: Examine the opportunities and challenges that small businesses meet in large e-commerce environments

: Examine the opportunities and challenges that small businesses meet in large e-commerce environments Q8ADP
The first sector small businesses should concentrate on is products offered on the online market regarding their diverse quantity, quality, and how to transport them to the customers. It is widely accepted that e-commerce improves the efficiency of a business through a better organization of production processes, and widens selection for online customers (Vancauteren, 2011). Indeed, the online market seems to freely open for retailers the right to sell anything on the web without any limitations, almost all items customers need are available on the marketplace as long as they are legal and safe. The prospects, with visual online platforms, are great for e-commerce and its followers where products are cataloged in a more efficient manner that can help customers easily seek out their desired items and businesses themselves manage the goods' status through electronic tools. However, in the certain diverse online market, products with the same appearance inevitably differ from others by the price and quality which straightly leads to market riot with such appearances of counterfeits in lower quality. Hence, it becomes extremely important for a business to ensure offering buyers the most reasonable cost among competitive e-commerce because people can easily find out elsewhere on the networking sites. Also, trading on the web means that the transactions are made over pictures of the items, as the sellers and buyers are solely dealing through the screen. According to a report by Huseynov and Yildirim (2016), approximately 70% of participants pose an agreement that it is difficult to examine the quality of products in an e-commerce environment without any physical experience. Therefore, for small retailers who do not have enough popularity, making reliance on customers will be a challenge but then if this case is successfully managed, it will be a chance for gaining more attention from online buyers. Delivery time and cost are additionally an encounter for deciding to purchase on the web compared to instant consumption in a virtual shop. Ariff, Sylvester, Zakuan, Ismail, & Ali (2014) define that perceived delivery risk refers to a situation in which products are in fear of loss, damage, and not performing on time during the process of transportation for various circumstances so that the quality of the commodity is at least impacted. In short, a retailer needs to provide the customers with the best experience during the process of trading until the products are received to ensure further transactions.
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first
sector
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small
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businesses
should concentrate on is
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products
offered on the online

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market
regarding their diverse quantity,
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quality
, and how to transport them to the
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customers
. It
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is


widely
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accepted
that
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e-commerce
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improves
the efficiency of a
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business
through a better organization

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of
production processes, and widens selection for
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online
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customers
(
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Vancauteren
, 2011).
Indeed
, the

online market seems to
freely
open for retailers the right to sell anything on the web without any

limitations, almost all items
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customers
need are available on the marketplace as long as they are legal

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and
safe. The prospects, with visual
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online
platforms, are great for
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e-commerce
and its
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followers


where
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products
are cataloged
in a more efficient manner that can
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help
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customers
easily
seek out their

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desired
items and
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businesses
themselves manage the
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goods
' status through electronic tools.
However
,

in the certain diverse
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online
market,
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products
with the same appearance
inevitably
differ from others

by the price and
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quality
which
straightly
leads to market riot with such appearances of counterfeits in

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lower
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quality
.
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, it becomes
extremely
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important
for a
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business
to ensure offering buyers the

most reasonable cost among competitive
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e-commerce
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because
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people
can
easily
find out elsewhere

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on
the networking sites.
Also
, trading on the web means that the transactions
are made
over pictures

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of
the items, as the sellers and buyers are
solely
dealing through the screen. According to a report
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by


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Huseynov
and
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Yildirim
(2016), approximately 70% of participants pose an agreement that it is

difficult to examine the
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quality
of
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products
in an
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e-commerce
environment without any physical

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experience
.
Therefore
, for
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small
retailers who do not have
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enough
popularity, making reliance on

customers will be a challenge
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but
then if this case is
successfully
managed, it will be a chance for

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gaining
more attention from
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online
buyers. Delivery time and cost are
additionally
an encounter
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for


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deciding
to
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purchase
on the web compared to instant consumption in a virtual shop.
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Ariff
, Sylvester,

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Zakuan
, Ismail, & Ali (2014) define that perceived delivery
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risk
refers to a situation in which

products are in fear of loss, damage, and not performing on time during the process of transportation

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for
various circumstances
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so
that the
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quality
of the commodity is at least impacted. In short, a
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retailer


needs to provide the
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customers
with the best experience during the process of trading until the

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products
are received
to ensure
further
transactions.
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IELTS essay : Examine the opportunities and challenges that small businesses meet in large e-commerce environments

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  American English
26 paragraphs
399 words
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