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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The role of free health service is still widely debated nowadays, with some people claming that it should be available even if the most advanced medical treatments are not appliciable. I personally strongly agree with this viewpoint, and I will explain why. Fistly, the community is benefited from free health services even if it is only basic treatments, especially the low-income families. In other words, most of the health services around the world is pricy unless you have a high percentage or full insurance coverage. Providing free basic treatments to poverty families can greatly reduce their financial stresses. For instance, by providing medicines to diseases like fever, coughing or diabetes for gree can help saving money. What's more, the government has the reaponsibility to provide a free access of health services to its citizens. The tax revenue that the government earned should be used in building free health services and centers. Hence, the residences can enjoy benefits that provided by the government. Lastly, I believe that the free health services should be available even if the advanced medical treatments may not be accessable through the service because the basic treatments are usually the basic needs for vast majority of people. I do appreciate that some people think differently, saying that the free service should not be avilable as the fact that maintaining such facilities is costly to the government. Neverthless, I believe that more free health centers can create job opportunities to local people. Thus, it leads to economic grow as the emplynment rate increases. Overall, I believe that a free health service is practical and important for countris to have in order to support citizens financially and provide basic treatments is crucial.
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claming
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Fistly
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services
even if it is
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only
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basic
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treatments
,
especially
the low-income families.
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, most of the
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health
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services
around the world is
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pricy
unless you have a high percentage or full insurance coverage. Providing
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free
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basic
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treatments
to poverty families can
greatly
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reduce
their financial
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.
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saving
money. What's more, the
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reaponsibility
to provide a
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access of
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services
to its citizens. The tax revenue that the
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earned should be
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used
in building
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free
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health
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services
and centers.
Hence
, the residences can enjoy benefits that provided by the
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government
.
Lastly
, I believe that the
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free
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health
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services
should be available even if the advanced medical
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treatments
may not be
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accessable
through the
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service
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the
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basic
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treatments
are
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needs for
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vast majority of
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differently
, saying that the
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should not be
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avilable
as the fact that maintaining such facilities is costly to the
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government
.
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Neverthless
, I believe that more
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free
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centers can create job opportunities to local
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people
.
Thus
, it leads to economic grow as the
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emplynment
rate increases.

Overall
, I believe that a
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health
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service
is practical and
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important
for
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countris
to have in order to support citizens
financially
and provide
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basic
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treatments
is crucial.
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IELTS essay Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.

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