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every country has poor people and with different way deal with poor people in ever coutry .

every country has poor people and with different way deal with poor people in ever coutry. 8LGbx

Poverty has become biggest crisis in the world because every nationa has privation masses and in each and every coutry deal with neddy dwellers with distinctive ways. Which I am going to contemplate my views along with decades in forthcoming paragraphs. By skating a beam of light, First and foremost, in many states big issue of poverty which is lack of education because poor person cannot pay the hefty fees in school in the present scenario. Furthermore, due to poverty some children such as, under 18 they do the work of waiter in restaurants and shops. In addition, the significant threat of penury it is a unemployment because more individualso have well graduate but they have not any job for fulfil their nessaries. Scrolling towards in the infusion side, there are bustling ways which can tackle this issue. First of all, authority can provide the free education to poor folks as well as uniforms and books. Apart from this, public should promote the the jobs for needy dwellers and rendered the food products in every Kingdom so with these way's can reduce the population of ideigence. As a result, community should create awareness in individuals who get wedding with each other after 20 year old because they have not experience of life due this negligence increase the population and it is main reason of privation. To conclude, no doubt, destitution has become crisis in every Kingdom but richest people and government should with co-operation they can improve the privation.

Poverty has become A determiner is probably missing here: "the biggest".the biggest
biggest
 crisis in the world This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 every Possible spelling mistake found.nationalnationnationsNationnation a
nationa
 has privation masses and in each and every Possible spelling mistake found.country
coutry
 deal with Possible spelling mistake found.TeddyneedyEddyteddyeddynerdy
neddy
 dwellers with distinctive ways. “Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
 I am going to contemplate my views along with decades in forthcoming paragraphs. By skating a beam of light, First
 and foremost, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 states This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 issue of poverty which is lack of education This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 poor person cannot pay the hefty fees in school in the present scenario. Furthermore
, due to poverty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 children such as, under 18 they do the work of waiter in restaurants and shops. In addition
, the significant threat of penury it is Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 unemployment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 more Possible spelling mistake found.individualsindividual soindividuals o
individualso
 have well graduate This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they have not any job for fulfil their Possible spelling mistake found.pessaries
nessaries
. Scrolling towards in the infusion side, there are bustling ways which can tackle this issue. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, authority can provide the free education to poor folks as well
 as uniforms and books. Apart from this, public should promote Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 jobs for needy dwellers and rendered the food products in every Kingdom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 with Did you mean "this way" or "these ways"?this waythese ways
these way
's can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the population of Possible spelling mistake found.diligenceindigence
ideigence
. As a result
, community should create awareness in individuals who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 wedding with each other after 20 year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have not Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "experienced".experienced
experience
 of life due this negligence increase the population and it is main reason of privation. To conclude
, no doubt, destitution has become crisis in every Kingdom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 richest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should with co-operation they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 the privation. 