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essay topics: Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects v.1

essay topics: Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects v. 1
University is a place where higher education is imparted to the Students. Children undergo different sort of eligible criteria to avail admission in a reputed university. Universities make a person specialized in Subject. Many people think that different subjects should be taught, however other people believe that only compulsory subjects should be part of the course. Thus this essay will put light on the on the subject in detail. To begin with, additional subject like art and craft, personality development and sports subjects should be taught along with the course. These subjects will boost the overall personality of the student. There are different types of quota where students can get jobs while applying and get additional scores. For an instance in government jobs there is separate quota for sports, and games also. Even, in many private organisation not only the qualification which is considered instead of this the communication skills and other curricular activities also. In addition to this, it will also help the students to obtain preference in this competitive world because course subjects are mandatory and cleared by all the students On the flip side, extra subjects will a burden on the children rather than an advantage. In the field of technical education and professional education these additional subject does not carry any weightage. For an instance, in the field of medical and engineering. Moreover this would be interruption and mind diversion of the students. It can be concluded that university education should be combination of compulsory subject and selective subjects according to the preference of the university children. In fact there must be the provision of the additional subject according the stream of the students
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University
is a place where higher
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education
is imparted
to the
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Students
. Children undergo
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different
sort of eligible criteria to avail admission in a reputed
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university
.
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Universities
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make
a person specialized in
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Subject
.
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Many
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people
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think
that
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different
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subjects
should
be taught
,
however
other
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people
believe that
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only
compulsory
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subjects
should be part of the course.
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Thus
this essay will put light
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on the on the
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subject
in detail.

To
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begin
with,
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additional
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subject
like art and craft, personality development and sports
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subjects
should
be taught
along with the course. These
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subjects
will boost the
overall
personality of the
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student
. There are
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different
types of quota where
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students
can
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get
jobs while applying and
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get
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additional
scores. For an instance in
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government
jobs there is separate quota for sports, and games
also
. Even, in
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many
private
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organisation
not
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only
the qualification which
is considered
instead
of this the communication
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skills
and other curricular activities
also
.
In addition
to this, it will
also
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help
the
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students
to obtain preference in this competitive world
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because
course
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subjects
are mandatory and cleared by all the
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students


On the flip side, extra
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subjects
will a burden on the children
rather
than an advantage. In the field of technical
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education
and professional
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education
these
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additional
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subject
does not carry any weightage. For an instance, in the field of medical and engineering.
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Moreover
this would be interruption and mind diversion of the students.

It can
be concluded
that
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university
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education
should be combination of compulsory
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subject
and selective
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subjects
according to the preference of the
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university
children. In fact there
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must
be the provision of the
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additional
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subject
according the stream of the
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students
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay essay topics: Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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