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Enviermental problem so world faching great

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Governments, environmentalists and large organisations, in many countries, are trying to curb environmental problems, and a part of this effort is to make people aware of environmental issues. It is surprising how our dietary habits or the dresses we wear can all contribute to the environmental problems and that is why without involving ordinary citizens, government bodies and private organisations can not reverse the downward fall when it comes to the environment. To begin with, our environment is becoming worse with every passing day and without awareness among ordinary citizens, it will become impossible to achieve environmental protection. We, as ordinary citizens, are constantly contributing to global warming, pollution and climate change. To illustrate, the cars we drive exhaust carbon dioxide, the dresses we wear require a huge amount of fibres and water, the plastic bags we use end up in the water, and even the diets we follow can impact the climate. Thus, if people are not made cognizant of their actions that are directly or indirectly responsible for global warming, they will not fully comprehend the gravity of the intricacies and feel responsible. Climate change is so large a problem that only governments and large organizations can not work to find a solution for that, and a coordinated effort is required. It is undeniable that countries have taken serious steps to curb environmental problems and our leaders are meeting frequently to discuss it. Restrictions are in place on gas emissions, fossils fuel use, plastic production and use, and alternative sources of green energy are being invested upon. But if the efforts are not made at an individual level, the magnitude of damage and pollutions would far outstrip the efforts. To cite an example, scientists, engineers, environmentalists and the authority may come out with proposals and invest money in research, but they can not control the amount of plastic bags we use and throw away without recycling. Every environmental problem is related to our human lifestyle and unconsciousness, so it is high time to include the syllabus about environmental protection in our school. We have got only one planet to live on, and we must save it. In conclusion, whatever we do to the environment will return and affect us. So all levels of education should emphasize how we can be more responsible in protecting it. A joint approach by the authority and mass people can only make it happen.
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Governments
, environmentalists and large
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organisations
, in
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many
countries, are trying to curb
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environmental
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problems
, and a part of this
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effort
is to
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make
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people
aware of
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environmental
issues. It is surprising how our dietary habits or the dresses we wear can all contribute to the
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environmental
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problems
and
that is
why without involving ordinary citizens,
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government
bodies and private
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organisations
can not reverse the downward fall when it
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comes
to the environment.

To
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begin
with, our environment is becoming worse with every passing day and without awareness among ordinary citizens, it will become impossible to achieve
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environmental
protection. We, as ordinary citizens, are
constantly
contributing to global warming, pollution and climate
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change
. To illustrate, the cars we drive exhaust carbon dioxide, the dresses we wear require a huge amount of
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fibres
and water, the plastic bags we
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use
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end
up in the water, and even the diets we follow can impact the climate.
Thus
, if
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people
are not made cognizant of their actions that are
directly
or
indirectly
responsible for global warming, they will not
fully
comprehend the gravity of the intricacies and feel responsible. Climate
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change
is
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so
large a
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problem
that
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only
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governments
and large
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organizations
can not work to find a solution for that, and a coordinated
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effort
is required
.

It is undeniable that countries have taken serious steps to curb
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environmental
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problems
and our leaders are meeting
frequently
to discuss it. Restrictions are in place on gas emissions, fossils fuel
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use
, plastic production and
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use
, and alternative sources of green energy are
being invested
upon.
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But
if the
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efforts
are not made at an individual level, the magnitude of damage and pollutions would far outstrip the
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efforts
. To cite an example, scientists, engineers, environmentalists and the authority may
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come
out with proposals and invest money in research,
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but
they can not control the amount of plastic bags we
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use
and throw away without recycling. Every
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environmental
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problem
is related
to our human lifestyle and unconsciousness,
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so
it is high time to include the syllabus about
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environmental
protection in our school. We have
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got
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only
one planet to
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live
on, and we
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must
save it.

In conclusion
, whatever we do to the environment will return and affect us.
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So
all levels of education should emphasize how we can be more responsible in protecting it. A joint approach by the authority and mass
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people
can
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only
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make
it happen.
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IELTS essay Enviermental problem so world faching great

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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