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email to manager explaining that the data has been changed to prior week

email to manager explaining that the data has been changed to prior week JoOd6

I have observed that there is a change in data P5W2 waste report as compared to the last week P5W1 and this happen in the line Lfs Gmmy (900623) as it was 18k previous week, which has changed in the current week P5W2 & it shows as (182k) in W1 & 201k in W2, although, the total impact is same 18k as it was shown in the last report (P5W1) In P5W2 dashboard, I haven’t changed the previous week data (Week1) and kept it remain same because the total impact of this line is same 18k. (Refer below) I appreciate if you please let me know if it looks appropriate or require any changes, then I will distribute into the team accordingly.

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 in data P5W2 waste report as compared to the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 P5W1 and The verb 'happen' is plural. Did you mean: "this happens"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this happens
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, which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
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 in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
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 P5W2 & it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 as (182k) in W1 & 201k in W2, although, the total impact is same 18k as it was shown
 in the last report (P5W1)

In P5W2 dashboard, I haven’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
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 the previous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 the total impact of this line is same 18k. (Refer below)

I appreciate if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if it looks appropriate or require any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, then I will distribute into the team accordingly
. 