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Elephant behavior like artisyic ability

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Elephants are fantastic animals, live in lag area of the earth and their is a long interst of people on the elephants' behaviors. The article taking about speciefic behaviors of elephants and how we analize these behaviors. On the other hand, the lecture in the listening sections disagrees with the analizing and the claims of the author. The disscusion begins by how the elephants awear of their death time and the old elephants escape to elephant graveys to die alone near the water. The speaker blieves that there is misunderstanding about the old elephents behavior. He mention that they leave the herds not to die a lone, they just go to a place has soft vigitable so they can eat without having teeth. This place most of the time is near the water and it ends up by them to die in this place which called elephant graveys. However, the writer holds that the old elephants leave the holds to a place has water because they know that they will die soon. Furthermore, the reading discusses the elephants aristic ability. The professor in the lecture disputes this claime. He holds that humans train the elephants painting by stroke their ears. He adds that the elephant ears are senstive so remeber the prush stroke and just drow line by pain not beacouse they know the flower shap or any other thing. In contrast, the writer thinks the elephants have artistic talent and can drow flowers or other elephants. The final encounter is about elephant fear of mice. The lecturer assumes that elephants fear from mice as a result of that they are not familiar with mice and this is natural animal behavior. He adds that elephants in the zoo not react to mice since they are famliar to the mices. In the reading is differnt point of view, the authors saies that there is a huge believe that elephants afraid of mice and even nor afraind of wild animals like lions.
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Elephants
are fantastic animals,
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live
in lag area of the earth and
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their
is a long
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interst
of
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people
on the elephants'
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behaviors
. The article taking about
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speciefic
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behaviors
of
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elephants
and how we
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analize
these
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behaviors
.
On the other hand
, the lecture in the listening sections disagrees with the
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analizing
and the claims of the author.

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disscusion
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begins
by how the
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elephants
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awear
of their death time and the
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old
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elephants
escape to
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elephant
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graveys
to
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die
alone near the water. The speaker
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blieves
that there is misunderstanding about the
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old
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elephents
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behavior
. He
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mention
that they
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leave
the herds not to
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die
a lone, they
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just
go to a
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place
has soft vigitable
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so
they can eat without having teeth. This
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place
most of the time is near the water and it ends up by them to
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die
in this
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place
which called
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elephant
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graveys
.
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, the writer holds that the
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old
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elephants
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leave
the holds to a
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place
has water
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because
they know that they will
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die
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soon
.

Furthermore
, the reading discusses the
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elephants
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aristic
ability. The professor in the lecture disputes this
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claime
. He holds that humans train the
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elephants
painting by stroke their ears. He
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adds
that the
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elephant
ears are
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senstive
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so
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remeber
the
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prush
stroke and
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drow
line by pain not
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beacouse
they know the
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flower shap
or any other thing.
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, the writer
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thinks
the
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elephants
have artistic talent and can
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drow
flowers or other elephants.

The final encounter is about
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elephant
fear of mice. The lecturer assumes that
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elephants
fear from mice
as a result
of that they are not familiar with mice and this is natural animal
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behavior
. He
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adds
that
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elephants
in the zoo not react to mice since they are
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famliar
to the
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mices
. In the reading is
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differnt
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saies
that there is a huge
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believe
that
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elephants
afraid of mice and even nor
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afraind
of wild animals like lions.
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IELTS essay Elephant behavior like artisyic ability

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
330 words
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