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Write a paragraph (at least 150 words) on ONE of the topics: How to make a first good impression on a classmate/ teacher/ neighbor/ college roommate/ friend’s parents….

Write a paragraph (at least 150 words) on ONE of the topics: How to make a first good impression on a classmate/ teacher/ neighbor/ college roommate/ friend’s parents…. 7WDEk
You’ve probably heard the saying “You only get one chance to make a first impression. ” It's true, and quickly making a good impression on your teacher is an essential part of having a successful school year. The first thing is to be on time. To illustrate, everyone should try to arrive a few minutes earlier to avoid things that will make them late to class, as students not being on time make teachers feel that they are disrespecting them and wasting their time. So people should pay attention to the time whenever they have an appointment. Next, you should be polite to your teachers. Dressing uniform, a white shirt and a pants are the best choices. Try to smile as often as possible so that people will thik that you are a friendly and kind person. Don't keep angry face to them, if you don't hear their question clearly, you can ask them to repeat. You should be say "please", "thank you". Finally, actively participate in the class from the very beginning. You can ask great questions to your teacher, make eye contact, raise your hand and participate in class discussions. This shows that you are doing your best to interact with your teacher and understand what they are talking about. For example, in the current epidemic situation we have to study online, if possible, always turn on your camera so the teacher can see you and they can know you are paying attention. Leave an impression on your teacher on the first day of school. All in all, I suggest you that you should be polite, friendly, smile frequently and pay attention to your teacher. ______________________________________________________________________
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make
a
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quickly
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good
impression on your
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teacher
is an essential part of having a successful school year. The
first
thing is to be on
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time
. To illustrate, everyone should try to arrive a few minutes earlier to avoid things that will
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make
them late to
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class
, as students not being on
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time
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make
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teachers
feel that they are disrespecting them and wasting their
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time
.
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people
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time
whenever they have an appointment.
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, you should be polite to your
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teachers
. Dressing uniform, a white shirt and
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that you are a friendly and kind person. Don't
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participate in the
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class
from the
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very
beginning. You can ask great questions to your
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teacher
,
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make
eye contact, raise your hand and participate in
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class
discussions. This
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shows
that you are doing your best to interact with your
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teacher
and understand what they are talking about.
For example
, in the
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current
epidemic situation we
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have to
study online, if possible, always turn on your camera
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so
the
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teacher
can
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see
you and they can know you are paying attention.
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Leave
an impression on your
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teacher
on the
first
day of school. All in all, I suggest you that you should be polite, friendly, smile
frequently
and pay attention to your
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teacher
. ______________________________________________________________________
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IELTS essay Write a paragraph (at least 150 words) on ONE of the topics: How to make a first good impression on a classmate/ teacher/ neighbor/ college roommate/ friend’s parents….

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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