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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education has become the most powerful tool in today's society. However, it is not always easy to seek an education because education is costly nowadays. Hence, it is asserted that the Government should pay for every level of education while providing it for free. I strongly agree with this viewpoint because free education would make it accessible to everyone, especially to the weaker sector of society and eliminate child labour. Although many would argue that free things are taken granted, it is certainly not applicable for education. In today's money-driven world, people want to achieve as many degrees as possible for better career prospects, leading to better employment. This, however, is only pursued by the upper economic sectors which can afford education while the those belonging to lower socioeconomic statuses are marginalised to illiteracy and ultimately, poverty. By removing the educational monetary barrier, officials can ensure that every citizen has an equal opportunity to receive an education. This can tremendously benefit the more indigent population as they now can send their children to seek education. The free education concept was mentioned in the book 'A Greater Life' written by the world-renowned entrepreneur Bill Gates. He stated that free, universal access to education has a tremendous promising future for humanity. Nevertheless, another reason why education should be made free is to eliminate child labour. It is a significant component of poverty in the least economic countries. Providing free education for every child in the nation would encourage parents to send them to school. Hence, they will not force their offsprings for labour at a young age, thus eliminating child labour. Consequently, it would produce a population of highly skilled professionals which adds to its economic advancement. To sum up, I agree that the Government should make every level of education accessible for free of charge so that every student has an equal opportunity to receive an education. Importantly, it can minimise child labour in society.
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today
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However
, it is not always easy to seek an
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education
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because
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education
is costly nowadays.
Hence
, it
is asserted
that the
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Government
should pay for every level of
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education
while providing it for
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free
. I
strongly
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agree
with this viewpoint
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because
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free
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would
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make
it accessible to everyone,
especially
to the weaker sector of society and eliminate
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child
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labour
.

Although
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many
would argue that
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free
things
are taken
granted, it is
certainly
not applicable for
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education
. In
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today
's money-driven world,
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people
want to achieve as
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many
degrees as possible for better career prospects, leading to better employment. This,
however
, is
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only
pursued by the upper economic sectors which can afford
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education
while the those belonging to lower socioeconomic statuses are
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marginalised
to illiteracy and
ultimately
, poverty. By removing the educational monetary barrier, officials can ensure that every citizen has an equal opportunity to receive an
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education
. This can
tremendously
benefit the more indigent population as they
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now
can
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send
their children to seek
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education
. The
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free
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education
concept
was mentioned
in the book 'A Greater Life' written by the world-renowned entrepreneur Bill Gates. He stated that
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free
, universal access to
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education
has a tremendous promising future for humanity.

Nevertheless
, another reason why
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education
should
be made
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free
is to eliminate
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child
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labour
. It is a significant component of poverty in the least economic countries. Providing
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free
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education
for every
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child
in the nation would encourage parents to
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send
them to school.
Hence
, they will not force their offsprings for
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labour
at a young age,
thus
eliminating
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child
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labour
.
Consequently
, it would produce a population of
highly
skilled professionals which
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adds
to its economic advancement.

To sum up, I
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agree
that the
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Government
should
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make
every level of
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education
accessible for
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free
of charge
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so
that every student has an equal opportunity to receive an
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education
.
Importantly
, it can
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minimise
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child
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labour
in society.
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IELTS essay Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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