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Eating at home vs. Eating out

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In recent years, to satisfy the increasing demand for food services, owers decide to boost not only in quantity but also the quality of their restaurants, cafeterias and foodstalls; however, people should eat home instead of eating out. Firstly, people spend more money eatting out than serving themselves at home. Besides paying for the food price, customers have to disburse the service fee, taxes, even tips for waiters. On the contrary, when people eat at home, they buy ingredients at better quality and better prices. Second, eating at home is good for health. Restaurants mostly serve high-carb and high-fat food that makes the eaters fattier and therefore affects their health. Nevertheless, housewives can supply more vitamins, fibrous foods and reduce fat, additives when providing food for their families. Lastly, people spend less time eating at home than outside. Indeed, unlike waiting for order food service at restaurants, individuals cooking by themselves don’t have to wait for anything and instantly enjoy hot dishes cooked by their own hands. In short, people should reduce the frequency of eating out and maintain their cooking and eating home habit.
In recent years, to satisfy the increasing demand for
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food
services,
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owers
decide to boost not
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only
in quantity
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but
also
the quality of their restaurants, cafeterias and
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foodstalls
;
however
,
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people
should eat home
instead
of
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eating
out.
Firstly
,
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people
spend more money
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eatting
out than serving themselves at home.
Besides
paying for the
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food
price, customers
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have to
disburse the service fee, taxes, even tips for waiters.
On the contrary
, when
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people
eat at home, they
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buy
ingredients at better quality and better prices. Second,
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eating
at home is
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good
for health. Restaurants
mostly
serve high-carb and high-
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fat
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food
that
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makes
the eaters fattier and
therefore
affects their health.
Nevertheless
, housewives can supply more vitamins, fibrous
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foods
and
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reduce
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fat
, additives when providing
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food
for their families.
Lastly
,
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people
spend less time
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eating
at home than outside.
Indeed
, unlike waiting for order
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food
service at restaurants, individuals cooking by themselves don’t
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have to
wait for anything and
instantly
enjoy hot dishes cooked by their
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own
hands. In short,
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people
should
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reduce
the frequency of
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eating
out and maintain their cooking and
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eating
home habit.
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IELTS essay Eating at home vs. Eating out

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
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