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Earthworms effect on the ecosystem

Earthworms effect on the ecosystem Kwq3M
In an overview, in this speech and reading discussed about earthworms and drawbacks and advantage of them to the soil, plants, animals and whole ecosystem of forest. Deliberately, the essential indications in the lecture cast doubt on the fundamental points in the reading. First of all, the lecture states that the earthworms are causing significant damage to some forest by destroying soil cover. However, this is refutes the topic in reading that the asserts that earthworms have beneficial effect on the soil. Furthermore, about to delve duff, the lecture declares that treat earthworms pose to wildflower because they taking organic matter from the surface soil an moving them into the deeper of the soil. So, they cleaning forest floor and leads to destroying wildflower in forests. Although, this is opposite with clues of the reading that clearly indicates earthworms useful plants in ever conceivable way. Finally, the lecture concluded that with eliminating duff as the habitat for a lot animals from forest floor, some animals related to them such as insects, spiders, also disappear and in turn, other animals that feed on them. As the result, the whole of forest ecosystem is in danger awfully. While, this challenges the content in the text that worms are a food source for animals and have a positive force in the ecosystem.
In an overview, in this speech and reading
Did you mean simply "discussed earthworms"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discussed about earthworms
and drawbacks and advantage of them to the
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soil
, plants,
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animals
and whole ecosystem of
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forest
.
Deliberately
, the essential indications in the
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lecture
cast doubt on the fundamental points in the reading.

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First of all
, the
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lecture
states that the earthworms are causing significant damage to
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some
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forest
by destroying
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soil
cover.
However
, this is refutes the topic in reading that the asserts that earthworms have beneficial effect on the soil.

Furthermore
, about to delve duff, the
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lecture
declares that treat earthworms pose to wildflower
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because
Did you mean "they're taking", "they are taking", or "they were taking"?
they taking
organic matter from the surface
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soil
Did you mean "and moving them"?
an moving them
into the
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deeper
of the
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soil
.
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So
,
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they cleaning
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forest
floor and leads to destroying wildflower in
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forests
.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, this is opposite with clues of the reading that
clearly
indicates earthworms useful plants in ever conceivable way.

Finally
, the
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lecture
concluded that with eliminating duff as the habitat for a lot
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animals
from
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forest
floor,
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some
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animals
related to them such as insects, spiders,
also
disappear and in turn, other
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animals
that feed on them. As the result, the whole of
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forest
ecosystem is in
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danger
awfully. While, this challenges the content in the text that worms are a food source for
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animals
and have a
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positive
force in the ecosystem.

IELTS essay Earthworms effect on the ecosystem

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
219 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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