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E- District service in delhi for all

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e-District Delhi is an online portal of Department of Revenue, Government of NCT of Delhi that delivers various online services of different Departments to the citizens. Recently, Delhi Government has recently announced to provide an aid of Rs. 5000/- to all the constructions workers registered on the portal. There are more than 40000 constructions workers who are registered on the e-portal. Those who have not registered yet can apply and get the benefit. The government has already started distributing the aid to the workers so that they can tackle the financial crises they are suffering due to the Covid outbreak.
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e-District
Delhi is an online portal of Department of Revenue,
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Government
of
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NCT
of Delhi that delivers various online services of
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different
Departments to the citizens. Recently, Delhi
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Government
has recently announced to provide an aid of Rs. 5000/- to all the constructions workers registered on the portal. There are more than 40000 constructions workers who
are registered
on the e-portal. Those who have not registered
yet
can apply and
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get
the benefit. The
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government
has already
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started
distributing the aid to the workers
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so
that they can tackle the financial crises they are suffering due to the
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Covid
outbreak.
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IELTS essay E- District service in delhi for all

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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