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Due to rapid expansion of supermarket, the local shops are unable to compete. To what extent, do you agree?

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Because of the increasing trend of supermarket, the grocery in the same local area, are incapable to conduct the trade. In my opinion, the separate area and schedule for supermarket and local stores, is the most effective way to solve such problem. Correspondingly. the local traders need the subsidy so they can be competent to supermarket endorsing cheaper price than departmental store. The demarcation of area brings differences in the access of distance and time. As a matter of fact, the consumers purchase the goods in those places whichever they feel easy. If the range of departmental store is not separated, the entire market can be dominated by big business hub.

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 of the increasing trend of supermarket, the grocery in the same local area, are incapable to conduct the trade. In my opinion, the separate area and schedule for supermarket and local stores, is the most effective way to solve such problem. Correspondingly
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 local traders need the subsidy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 they can be competent to supermarket endorsing cheaper price than departmental store. The demarcation of area brings differences in the access of distance and time. As a matter of fact, the consumers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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 whichever they feel easy. If the range of departmental store is not separated, the entire market can be dominated
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