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Dry method of coffee production

Dry method of coffee production 0ARlQ

The illustration shows the various stages involved in the production of coffee using the dry method. First of all, the beans are sorted by hand and then cleaned using a sieve. After that, the coffee beans are dried in the sun for 4 weeks and then they are turned and raked by the farmer and before the beans are sent to the mill they are stored in silo. To continue the process hulling needs to be done by a worker, followed by grading using a special toop. The next step is bagging, that they can be sold in the 10th stage. Following this, a special machine is used for roasting the coffee. Finally, the coffee is packaged and delivered to be sold in the markets.

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 the various stages involved in the production of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 using the dry method.

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First of all
, the beans are sorted
 by hand and then cleaned using a sieve. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
 beans are dried
 in the sun for 4 Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).weeks, and
weeks and
 then they are turned
 and raked by the farmer and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the beans are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the mill they are stored
 in silo. To continue the process hulling needs to be done
 by a worker, followed by grading using a special Possible spelling mistake found.tootooktoplooptooltroop
toop
. The next
 step is bagging, that they can be sold
 in the 10th stage. Following this, a special machine is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for roasting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcappuccinoespressocaffeine
coffee
is packaged
 and delivered to be sold
 in the markets. 