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in many places in the world. Higher education does not come up with much effectiveness as we expected. Instead of being provided knowledge and required practical skills, college students virtually focus on theoretical knowledge, lack of practicality to come over the examinations in school. The ordinary education system is no longer function-improving, whereas the interactive learning forms is not mentioned in college. The time spending on extracurricular activities is limited as well. Although a lot of occupations require good formal qualifications, that does not mean that any practice skills such as behavioural skills, teamwork skills are not necessary. Only theoretical knowledge but no software skills, students will not be able to have career prospects after graduating. in a knowledge-based society, requires the integrity of knowledge and skills. Therefore, tertiary education needs a substantial revolution to respond this social requires
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up with much effectiveness as we
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being provided
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knowledge
and required practical
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, college students
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focus on theoretical
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knowledge
, lack of practicality to
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over the examinations in school. The ordinary education system is no longer function-improving, whereas the interactive learning forms is not mentioned in college. The time spending on extracurricular activities
is limited
as well
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a lot of
occupations require
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good
formal qualifications, that does not mean that any practice
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skills
such as
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behavioural
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skills
, teamwork
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skills
are not necessary.
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theoretical
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knowledge
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but
no software
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skills
, students will not be able to have career prospects after graduating.
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a knowledge-based society, requires the integrity of
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IELTS essay does higher education disappointing us

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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