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Do you think young peole are more or less fit than 50 years ago? (why/ why not)

Do you think young peole are more or less fit than 50 years ago? (why/ why not) m18Q8

In my opinion, young people are getting more obese over time. Account for the development of the world, fast food which contains harmless additive and has high in fats, is increasing alternately. It is more and more good taste and smell, as well as its appearance that makes us hungrier and finally we put it into our mouth. Consequently, people are easily gain weight nowadays.

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