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Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

Do you think this is positive or negative situation? xDYp1
In developed countries people often like to have their own house rather than renting. In minor countries, having Home is more important and therefore renting it. I firmly believe that it is a positive situation for the country. Some countries ensure that there citizen lifestyle has to be modern. By having there own house, rather then relating on someone’s property. For example uae provides free will last today citizens after the age of 18 or above. Buy this strategy an individual will be responsible. On the other hand, Joni families will be unable to live in an apartment because of less availability of space. Nowadays most of the families have their accommodation at one place. In conclusion, it’s more effective to own a house rather than renting it. Our own give different satisfaction to a person
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like to have their
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own
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rather
than renting. In minor
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countries
, having Home is more
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important
and
therefore
renting it. I
firmly
believe that it is a
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positive
situation for the
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Some
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countries
ensure that there citizen lifestyle
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has to
be modern. By having there
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own
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house
,
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then
relating on someone’s property.
For example
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uae
provides free will last
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today
citizens after the age of 18 or above.
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Buy
this strategy an individual will be responsible.
On the other hand
, Joni families will be unable to
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live
in an apartment
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because
of less availability of space. Nowadays most of the families have their accommodation at one place.
In conclusion
, it’s more effective to
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own
a
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house
rather
than renting it. Our
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own
give
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different
satisfaction to a
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person
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IELTS essay Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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