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Do you think Studying abroad is good or bad

Do you think Studying abroad is good or bad BWdm5

Nowadays study in some new fields overseas has become more fashionable than before. Meanwhile, numerous of students in our country are planning to immigrate for studying and then settle in that country. Thus, naturally I agree with the drawbacks of studying in foreign countries. Irrespective of age, most of the students in Iran reckon that their success in other countries is guaranteed, but immigrating abroad is just the beginning of their meandrous journey. I can divide the pitfalls into two categories, firstly I can point to some domestic issues they will face. I opine that our internal economical obstacles ( which is compounding due to recent news ) would be the chief problem. Furthermore, the second motive could be visiting the embassies and getting VISA. To clarify the second rational, not only learning a new language would be solid for you, but also, learning the novel courses in that language is mandatory. Thus it will exacerbated your fancy situation.

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