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Do you think it should be enforced in all schools? 15A5A
In many countries, arguments on whether school ought to mandate wearing uniforms or not has not been settled. In my point of view, coming to school in a uniform should be made compulsory in all countries. First of all, emotion of being equal always remains in the mind of children when they observe that everyone else in the school dress exactly similar. Because all the students having their attire uniformly regardless of being wealthy or poor. For example, a daughter of a millionaire outfits just as a daughter of a labor and also have shoes of the same color, quality and brand. Moreover, there is no discrimination. Unlike students carrying clothes differently, all the pupils get equally taught, evaluated and treated by the teachers despite of their economic conditions. In addition, children also learn about the importance of togetherness and enjoyment this intimacy while representing themselves as a schoolchild of their school. They stay together, motivate their peers and stand out from groups of students from various other institutes. Furthermore, because they look all identical their classmates or guides can easily recognize them from the crowd when they take part in active competitions. Finally, enforcement of uniformity is helpful to teach the kids discipline, by means of taking care of their clothes or shoes, sometimes haircuts. In conclusion, schoolchildren should be imposed to attend the school only after they put on uniforms for some reasons including the same attention given by tutors, the feeling of being composed. Additionally, wearing constant clothes also gives a good lesson of becoming well-planned.
In
many
countries, arguments on whether
school
ought to mandate wearing uniforms or
not has not
been settled
. In my point of view, coming to
school
in a uniform should
be made
compulsory in all countries.

First of all
, emotion of being equal always remains in the mind of children when they observe that everyone else in the
school
dress exactly similar.
Because
all the students having their attire
uniformly
regardless of being wealthy or poor.
For example
, a daughter of a millionaire outfits
just
as a daughter of a labor and
also
have shoes of the same color, quality and brand.
Moreover
, there is no discrimination. Unlike students carrying clothes
differently
, all the pupils
get
equally
taught, evaluated and treated by the teachers
despite of
their economic conditions.

In addition
, children
also
learn about the importance of togetherness and enjoyment this intimacy while representing themselves as a schoolchild of their
school
. They stay together, motivate their peers and stand out from groups of students from various other institutes.
Furthermore
,
because
they look all identical their classmates or guides can
easily
recognize them from the crowd when they
take part
in active competitions.
Finally
, enforcement of uniformity is helpful to teach the kids discipline, by means of taking care of their clothes or shoes,
sometimes
haircuts.

In conclusion
, schoolchildren should
be imposed
to attend the
school
only
after they put on uniforms for
some
reasons including the same attention
given
by tutors, the feeling of
being composed
.
Additionally
, wearing constant clothes
also
gives a
good
lesson of becoming well-planned.
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IELTS essay Do you think it should be enforced in all schools?

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