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Do you think it is essential for schools to teach financial literacy?

Do you think it is essential for schools to teach financial literacy? WGjVW

Yes i think it is essential for schools to teach financial literacy. Because it will teach kids how to be wise with their money and other financial problems. They will learn the importance of saving money. Because kids don’t know how to wisely spend their money. It will help them when they get older and need to make financial decisions for themselves. It is important because wrong financial decisions can ruin your life. This class could help kids when they grow up and need to make a really important financial decision. Because money is important in the world it can be useful to have financial knowledge on things. Some people don’t know how to use their money wisely and that makes their life miserable later in life. Some might learn this skill as an adult but i think it is better if they learn when they are younger. So in conclusion yes i do think schools should teach financial literacy.

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