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Do you think happiness is important than physical health?

Do you think happiness is important than physical health? VwmQ7

Happiness is not important than physical health. both of them have equal importance for the human life. If people are happy, but after that their bodies find problem or they cannot medically treat, they will lose their happiness. Also, if people do not have any disease, but they are depressed, after some month they will find the difficulty in their body. Because with psychologic problem many of body’s organs will be sick. There are some diseases what the doctors cannot treat, like malignant cancers or many of incurable diseases. With this suffers people have to try to be happy, because good moral helps them to stay alive longer. If I want to choose one of them, I will choose physical health.

Happiness is not Use "(important)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(important)
important
 than physical health. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBoth
both
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people
 are happy, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after that their bodies find Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).problem, or
problem or
 they cannot medically
 treat, they will lose their happiness. Also
, if This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do not have any disease, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they are depressed
, after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 month they will find the difficulty in their body. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
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psychologic
 problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of body’s organs will be sick. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 diseases what the doctors cannot treat, like malignant cancers or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of incurable diseases. With this suffers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 try to be happy, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 moral This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to stay alive longer. If I want to choose one of them, I will choose physical health. 