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Do you agree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v.12

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 12
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings have been engaged in a great struggle to find the truth. Some people believe that the most important concern in all relationship always is telling the truth, while others believe otherwise. In this regard, there are a number advantages and disadvantages as to telling the truth, some of which are of great importance in comparison to others, elaborated hereunder. The opponents of this idea claim that people every day are telling white lie to one another since the truth always is offending. For instance, when one is asked by his or her friend about their appearance, one could not tell something bad. Therefore, they should tell an untruth. In addition, most companies are telling lies people in their advertisements to increase their sale. Moreover, all mothers tell untruth to their children owing to the fact that either they are not ready to understand it or the untruth makes their life beautiful. Employees, sometimes, lie to their bosses, otherwise they will be fined or fired. As a result, there are a large number situations which people think that it is not good idea to tell the truth. The advocates of this idea states that the truth always will be revealed. Therefore, it is not beneficial not to tell the truth since it is really an awkward moment when the truth would be unfolded, especially in relationship between people. Because the good relationship between people is founded on the trust and telling an untruth can destroy it. One of the most worthwhile characteristic among people is loyalty, and always have been rewarded through the history. People should tell the truth to others due to the fact that they expect others to do so. By taking into account all the above mentioned factors, we can reach the conclusion that the merits of telling the truth substantially outweigh the demerits of it. As far as I am concerned, telling the truth is the most significant concern in any relationship among people, and it is the key factor of the progress of developed societies. Unfortunately, I live in an underdeveloped society which is suffering from unfaithfulness and betrayal. Let' s not take honesty for granted and make world better place to live.
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been engaged
in a great struggle to find the
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people
believe that the most
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important
concern in all
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relationship
always is
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telling
the
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truth
, while others believe
otherwise
. In this regard, there are a number advantages and disadvantages as to
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telling
the
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truth
,
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some
of which are of great importance
in comparison
to others, elaborated hereunder.

The opponents of this
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idea
claim that
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people
every day are
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telling
white lie to one another since the
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truth
always is offending.
For instance
, when one
is asked
by
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his or her
friend about their appearance, one could not
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tell
something
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bad
.
Therefore
, they should
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tell
an
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untruth
.
In addition
, most
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companies
are
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telling
lies
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people
in their advertisements to increase their sale.
Moreover
, all mothers
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tell
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untruth
to their children owing to the fact that either they are not ready to understand it or the
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untruth
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makes
their life
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beautiful
. Employees,
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sometimes
, lie to their bosses,
otherwise
they will
be fined
or fired.
As a result
, there are a large number situations which
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people
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think
that it is not
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good
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idea
to
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tell
the truth.

The advocates of this
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idea
states that the
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truth
always will
be revealed
.
Therefore
, it is not beneficial not to
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tell
the
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truth
since it is
really
an awkward moment when the
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truth
would
be unfolded
,
especially
in
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relationship
between
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people
.
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the
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good
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relationship
between
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people
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is
founded on the trust and
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telling
an
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untruth
can
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destroy
it. One of the most worthwhile characteristic among
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people
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is
loyalty, and always have
been rewarded
through the history.
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People
should
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tell
the
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truth
to others due to the fact that they
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expect
others to do
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so
.

By taking into account all the above mentioned factors, we can reach the conclusion that the merits of
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telling
the
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truth
substantially
outweigh the demerits of it. As far as I
am concerned
,
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telling
the
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truth
is the most significant concern in any
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relationship
among
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people
, and it is the key factor of the progress of developed societies. Unfortunately, I
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live
in an underdeveloped society which is suffering from unfaithfulness and betrayal.
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make
world better place to
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live
.
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IELTS essay Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
374 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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