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Do you agree with “In some countries men discriminate against women?”

Do you agree with “In some countries men discriminate against women? ” 0prp9

Across the globe, in some parts of the world, men are against women. I agree with this sentence thoroughly. For instance, in some areas women should have more wearing than men because of religious laws which were confirmed by political men. In the middle east and specifically Muslim countries, women still are struggling for their basic rights. Men have instituted some rules against women with the excuse of religious view. There is quite a bit of separating women from men in public places such as transportation system. Despite all these discrepancies women persist to have societal positions, such as working in the society. The pressure on women is extremely harsh. Women know their absence in the society cannot improve their position. Even though women level in Islamic urbans follows as developing countries, in developed countries this kind of victimization can be seen in a modernized different way. Inequities in salaries still exist between sexes. Men tend to draw a distinction between themselves and women. Even men tendencies to do the same tasks as women’s with higher salaries put women at a disadvantage. Having no tutor, which is invaluable, in women’s jobs to guide them is another issue that diminishes commensurate conditions. Men prefer to lead young guys rather than ladies for their promotion. Women do not have any progression in their expert field in comparison with men, for no pros want to fund them or invest on. In conclusion, men seem to be biased against women in different shapes around the world.

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some
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men
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women
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this sentence thoroughly
. For instance
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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women
 should have more wearing than You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
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because
 of religious laws which were confirmed
 by political This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
.

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middle east
 and specifically
 Muslim countries, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
still
 are struggling for their basic rights. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
Men
 have instituted This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
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women
 with the excuse of religious view. There is quite a bit of separating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 in public places such as transportation system. Despite all these discrepancies You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 persist to have societal positions, such as working in the society. The pressure on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 is extremely
 harsh. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
Women
 know their absence in the society cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their position.

Even though
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 level in Islamic Possible spelling mistake found.urbanUrbanturbansurbaneunbans
urbans
 follows as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
, in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :developed nationscountries with a strong economyindustrialized nation
developed countries
 this kind of victimization can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in a modernized This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 way. Inequities in salaries still
 exist between sexes. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
Men
 tend to draw a distinction between themselves and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
. Even You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 tendencies to do the same tasks as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women’s
 with higher salaries put You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 at a disadvantage. Having no tutor, which is invaluable, in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women’s
 jobs to guide them is another issue that diminishes commensurate conditions. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
Men
 prefer to lead young guys rather
 than ladies for their promotion. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
Women
 do not have any progression in their expert field in comparison
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
, for no pros want to fund them or invest on.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
men
 seem to be biased
 against You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 shapes around the world. 