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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

: It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Marriage is one of the most important relationships in life. Virtually everyone at a certain point in their life dreams about having a long-lasting partner that only death can break up. Although some people may prefer getting married to someone different, I believe it is better to marry a person with your same values, tastes, and a way of seeing life. The first reason why I have this point of view is that marriage would more enjoyable with someone similar to you. You can do the same entertaining activities, go to the same places, and agree on several topics. For instance, let' s suppose you are an ambitious, wealthy man who loves luxurious cars, of well-known brand names, such as Rolls Royce, Maserati, etc. And your wife also loves these kinds of automobiles, you both would be happy to save money to purchase an amazing car. Consequently, both lovers would have fun dreaming together, going to cars exhibitions, and so on. On the other hand, if that very same man had a wife who does not like cars at all, and she loved expensive bags and clothes instead, for her it would not be nice that you want to spend all your money in a " stupid" car. Additionally, she might try to persuade you that clothes are more important than cars and you probably will never buy the car of your dreams. As a result, this partner would not have a complete pleasant marriage due to different tastes. Second, it is more likely to last a longer time together if you have the same perspective on life. Irreconcilable differences are a common cause of divorce. For couples who think too different is difficult to adapt to the other person. To be specific, if you are an atheist, feminist woman married a Christian man, you would probably have different opinions from your husband about controversial topics. You man may be participating in a pro-life event, while you are in a rebellious mob destroying everything you see to express your anger because you do not have your right to decide giving birth to a baby. At the end of the day, you and your husband may see each other furiously, and then, you begin a discussion. After several weeks of quarrels and drama, you cannot tolerate that situation anymore, and you will decide to go away and not to see you ex-husband anymore. So, as marriages with different beliefs are more likely to discuss, then they are more likely to last less time together. In summary, I think that marriage partners should be more similar since it is more fun and they are likely to have a longer, calmer relationship.
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Marriage
is one of the most
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important
relationships in life.
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only
death can break up. Although
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some
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people
may prefer getting married to someone
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different
, I believe it is better to marry a person with your same values, tastes, and a way of seeing life.

The
first
reason why I have this point of view is that
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marriage
would more enjoyable with someone similar to you. You can do the same entertaining activities, go to the same places, and
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agree
on several topics.
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man
who
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loves
luxurious
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cars
, of well-known brand names, such as
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Rolls Royce
, Maserati, etc. And your wife
also
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loves
these kinds of automobiles, you both would be happy to save money to
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purchase
an amazing
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car
.
Consequently
, both lovers would have fun dreaming together, going to
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cars
exhibitions, and
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so
on.
On the other hand
, if that
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very
same
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man
had a wife who does not like
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cars
at all, and she
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loved
expensive bags and clothes
instead
, for her it would not be nice that you want to spend all your money in a
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car
.
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, she might try to persuade you that clothes are more
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important
than
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cars
and you
probably
will never
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buy
the
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car
of your dreams.
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, this partner would not have a complete pleasant
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marriage
due to
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different
tastes.

Second, it is more
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likely
to last a longer time together if you have the same perspective on life. Irreconcilable differences are a common cause of divorce. For couples who
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think
too
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different
is difficult to adapt to the other person. To be specific, if you are an atheist, feminist woman married a Christian
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man
, you would
probably
have
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different
opinions from your husband about controversial topics. You
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man
may be participating in a pro-life
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event
, while you are in a rebellious mob destroying everything you
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see
to express your anger
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because
you do not have your right to decide giving birth to a baby. At the
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end
of the day, you and your husband may
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see
each other
furiously
, and then, you
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begin
a discussion. After several weeks of quarrels and drama, you cannot tolerate that situation anymore, and you will decide to go away and not to
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see
you ex-husband anymore.
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So
, as
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marriages
with
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different
beliefs are more
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likely
to discuss, then they are more
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likely
to last less time together.

In summary, I
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think
that
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marriage
partners should be more similar since it is more
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fun and
they are
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likely
to have a longer, calmer relationship.
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IELTS essay : It is better to marry someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
449 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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