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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationship between people. v.854

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationship between people. v. 854
In my opinion, telling the truth is one of the most important characteristics themselves that should be taken into account in different relationship that people have. In special relationship like family relationship and lifelong friendship the importance of this factor is very significant. It is more likely that certain significant relationship will be destroyed because of lack of truth between people. For instance, when a couple who has a lifelong relationship, does not tell truth to each other, little by little they can not count on and their life will be disturbed easily even after long time. It is clear that being truthfulness makes the relationship strong and leads to increasing loyalty. Moreover, when friends tell the trust and start their relationship by expecting to this main factor, they guarantee their relation for a long time. In contrast, when some one try to lie to each other without paying attention to the negative effect of this bad characteristic, he or she can not make a long time relationship. People do not like make relationship with someone who is not honest with them because they think that these kinds of people are not reliable persons. On the other hand, it can not be overlooked that in some cases, someone abuses from this factor easily and put their friends, partners, or coworkers under tremendous pressure by betraying their secrets which their friends honestly. At this special case, the person should pay utmost attention to what they share with people. The most proportion of people knows that in certain situations saying nothing is better than saying the trust. In conclusion, I personally believe that although telling the trust is very important factor in any relationship, taking the type of trust, situations, and the partner into account is also noticeable point. In some cases, telling the lie will be destroyed a long relationship that is built very difficult. So for enriching the relations and keep them strong, the persons should telling the trust in their close relationships.
In my opinion,
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telling
the truth is one of the most
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important
characteristics themselves that should
be taken
into account in
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different
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relationship
that
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people
have. In special
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relationship
like family
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relationship
and lifelong friendship the importance of this
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factor
is
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very
significant. It is more likely that certain significant
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relationship
will be
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destroyed
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because
of lack of truth between
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people
.

For instance
, when a couple who has a lifelong
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relationship
, does not
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tell
truth to each other,
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little
by
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little
they can not count on and their life will
be disturbed
easily
even after
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long
time. It is
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clear
that being truthfulness
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makes
the
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relationship
strong and leads to increasing loyalty.

Moreover
, when friends
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tell
the
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trust
and
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start
their
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relationship
by expecting to this main
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factor
, they guarantee their relation for a
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long
time.
In contrast
, when
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some one
try to lie to each other without paying attention to the
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negative
effect of this
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bad
characteristic, he or she can not
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make
a
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long
time
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relationship
.
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People
do not like
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make
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relationship
with someone who is not honest with them
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because
they
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think
that these kinds of
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people
are not reliable persons.

On the other hand
, it can not
be overlooked
that in
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some
cases, someone abuses from this
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factor
easily
and put their friends, partners, or coworkers under tremendous pressure by betraying their secrets which their friends
honestly
. At this special case, the person should pay utmost attention to what they share with
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people
. The most proportion of
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people
knows that in certain situations saying nothing is better than saying the trust.

In conclusion
, I
personally
believe that although
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telling
the
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trust
is
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very
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important
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factor
in any
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relationship
, taking the type of
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trust
, situations, and the partner into account is
also
noticeable point. In
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some
cases,
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telling
the lie will be
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destroyed
a
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long
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relationship
that
is built
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very
difficult.
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So
for enriching the relations and
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keep
them strong, the persons should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "tell"
telling
the
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trust
in their close
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relationships
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in relationship between people. v. 854

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
333 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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