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Discuss how this module has contributed to knowing, developing and promoting yourself towards achieving your professional goals in the future. You may want to use Kolb’s Reflective Model to inform and structure your answer.

Discuss how this module has contributed to knowing, developing and promoting yourself towards achieving your professional goals in the future. You may want to use Kolb’s Reflective Model to inform and structure your answer. DYmJj
In my 10 years of experience, I have been successful at performing the tasks assigned to me and have developed various skills like team management, communication, soft skills etc. Sure, enough it came with some hiccups, but I have never done any self-assessment to in those years to understand my strengths, weakness or my goal in life. I will have to say, that, I always thought that this is how a corporate life should be learning skills and growing. The ‘Knowing, Developing and promoting yourself towards achieving your professional goals’ module has impelled me in a positive way to sit, assess and determine my values, personality traits, strengths and weakness. Over the period of the module, I have researched on various and came across various topics like strength finder, SWOT analysis, etc. These have helped me in knowing myself. I have learnt that self-awareness is also an important aspect in life not only professionally but also on a personal level. In my previous experience I have observed that I was able to gel and mingle with people on a personal level and would help any team mate or person in need of help. One of the instances that I recall from my previous organization is that one of the team members approached me, wanting to learn about the project functionality. I was overwhelmed with his initiative and sat with him for extra hours after the office to ensure that he gained the knowledge he was looking for. We ended up being good friends. A few days later I was approached by more of my colleagues and new joiners asking to learn the same. This and many such instances have ascertained that bonding with people and helping them has been my nature, but I have never seen these qualities as a professional or a personal achievement or a like a development goal. Owing to the module I have not only been clear about my strengths but also other aspects like my weakness, threaths, opportunities. I have been able to set my self a short term and a long term goal with timelines, which I know will drive me towards a positive change in my life. Knowing my personality characteristics will also help in my future interviews, where I will be able to answer the ‘behavioural interview’ questions without giving it much thought as the module has clearly given me an idea about it.
In my 10 years of experience, I have been successful at performing the tasks assigned to me and have developed various
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skills
like team management, communication, soft
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skills
etc. Sure,
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enough
it came with
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some
hiccups,
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but
I have never done any self-assessment to in those years to understand my
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strengths
, weakness or my goal in
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life
. I will
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have to
say, that, I always
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thought
that this is how a corporate
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life
should be learning
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skills
and growing.

The ‘Knowing, Developing and promoting yourself towards achieving your professional goals’
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module
has impelled me in a
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positive
way to sit, assess and determine my values, personality traits,
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strengths
and weakness. Over the period of the
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module
, I have researched on various and came across various topics like
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strength
finder, SWOT analysis, etc. These have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me in knowing myself. I have
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learnt
that self-awareness is
also
an
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important
aspect in
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life
not
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only
professionally
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but
also
on a personal level.

In my previous experience I have observed that I was able to gel and mingle with
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people
on a personal level and would
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help
any
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team mate
or person in need of
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help
. One of the instances that I recall from my previous organization is that one of the team members approached me, wanting to learn about the project functionality. I
was overwhelmed
with his initiative and sat with him for extra hours after the office to ensure that he gained the knowledge he was looking for. We ended up being
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
friends. A few days later I
was approached
by more of my colleagues and new joiners asking to learn the same. This and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
such instances have ascertained that bonding with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and helping them has been my nature,
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but
I have never
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seen
these qualities as a professional or a personal achievement or a like a development goal.

Owing to the
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module
I have not
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only
been
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clear
about my
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strengths
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but
also
other aspects like my weakness,
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threaths
, opportunities. I have been able to set my self a short term and a long term goal with timelines, which I know will drive me towards a
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positive
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change
in my
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life
. Knowing my personality characteristics will
also
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help
in my future interviews, where I will be able to answer the ‘
Possible spelling mistake. 'behavioural' is British English.
behavioural
interview’ questions without giving it much
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thought
as the
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module
has
clearly
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given
me an
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idea
about it.
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IELTS essay Discuss how this module has contributed to knowing, developing and promoting yourself towards achieving your professional goals in the future. You may want to use Kolb’s Reflective Model to inform and structure your answer.

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