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Airport now and changes in the future after redevelopment

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The figures below depicts the changes that will take place in the southwest airport in the future after renovation of its. We can see in clear view, that there will be significant changes and new features will be added. There will be addition in both arrivals and departures gates. However, the cafe will be replaced by check in and a bag drop will be added in the departures. In addition to redevelopment strategy, the arrivals will be extended by a car hire place, ATM and cafe corner. Shops will be informed in the new version of the airport. The eight gates will be increased to eighteen gates as a Y model elongation. Also, the walkway will replaced by the sky train for speed and easy movement. To sum up, the style of the airport will have many significant features and new places to provide satisfaction and comfort.
The figures below depicts the
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changes
that will take place in the southwest airport in the future after renovation of its.

We can
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see
in
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view, that there will be significant
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changes
and new features will be
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added
.

There will be addition in both arrivals and departures gates.
However
, the
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cafe
will
be replaced
by
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check
in and a bag drop will be
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added
in the departures.

In addition
to redevelopment strategy, the arrivals will
be extended
by a car hire place, ATM and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
corner. Shops will
be informed
in the new version of the airport. The eight gates will
be increased
to eighteen gates as a Y model elongation.

Also
, the walkway will
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replaced
by the sky train for speed and easy movement.

To sum up, the style of the airport will have
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many
significant features and new places to provide satisfaction and comfort.
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IELTS essay Airport now and changes in the future after redevelopment

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