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Discuss both sides. Climate change

There is no doubt that human behaviour is modifying the natural temperature that is leading to climate change. Some people believe that we should look for a new path which could allow us to live with these changes. I tend to agree with this argument up to a point, and in this essay, I will support my views with examples. Those who think that we have to stop trying to prevent the Earth’s modifications might argue that we have to adapt to the current environment. I partly agree with this statement, and the reason for this is that we can not change our lifestyle radically. For example, non-natural sources provide the dominant part of the energy we use every day. If we stop using these resources, we will not have enough natural energy to continue our lives. As a consequence, the planet could collapse, and it could become into wars between countries. On the other hand, we should look to the future and make an effort to solve the climate problem we are causing. Not only we should think about ourselves and try to solve this now, but also we have to solve the planet issues for the next generations. For instance, while we are using non-renewable energy, we can invest in new technology and new materials which can help us to fight against the weather in the future. If we do not act now, it will finally result in the extinction of humanity. In conclusion, I accept that some people prefer not to solve the climate problem instead of investing in the future. Personally, I think that we should manage both situations, the adaptation to the new weather and trying to leave the best planet to future generations.
There is no doubt that human
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behaviour
is modifying the natural temperature
that is
leading to climate
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change
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Some
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people
believe that we should look for a
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new
path which could
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allow
us to
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live
with these
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changes
. I tend to
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agree
with this argument up to a point, and in this essay, I will support my views with examples.

Those who
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think
that we
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have to
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stop
trying to
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prevent
the Earth’s modifications might argue that we
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have to
adapt to the
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current
environment. I partly
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agree
with this statement, and
the reason for this is
that we can not
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change
our lifestyle
radically
.
For example
, non-natural sources provide the dominant part of the energy we
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use
every day. If we
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stop
using these resources, we will not have
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enough
natural energy to continue our
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lives
. As a consequence, the planet could collapse, and it could become into wars between countries.

On the other hand
, we should look to the
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future
and
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make
an effort to
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solve
the climate problem we are causing. Not
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only
we should
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think
about ourselves and try to
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solve
this
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now
,
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but
also
we
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have to
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solve
the planet issues for the
next
generations.
For instance
, while we are using non-renewable energy, we can invest in
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new
technology and
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new
materials which can
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help
us to fight against the weather in the
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future
. If we do not act
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now
, it will
finally
result in the extinction of humanity.

In conclusion
, I accept that
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some
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people
prefer not to
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solve
the climate problem
instead
of investing in the
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future
.
Personally
, I
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think
that we should manage both situations, the adaptation to the
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new
weather and trying to
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leave
the best planet to
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future
generations.
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IELTS essay Discuss both sides. Climate change

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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