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discuss both point of view and my personal opinion

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At the present time, there are a great number of tourist in many countries. Some local people think that tourist in other countries should follow host customs and behavior while other people argue that host country should open mind to welcome differences of cultural. This essay will discuss both point of view and my personal opinion. On the one side of the argument, there are local people who are the opinion that visitors should bland with local people and learning good local cultural. The most reason why someone should travel in other countries is seeing and learning difference life in difference countries. The best way to learn difference life is follow the local cultural and bland theirseleves. It will make the travel trip which extremely fun and significally interesting. On the other side of this argument, some local people argue againt the fact that hosting people should open mind in difference culturals. Some expertes suggest that difference believes are not wrong for example Western of tourists always ware shorts when they come to Asian countries because of the difference weather. There is a hot weather in Asian countries, in contrast to, Western countries have cold weather that will make when Western of tourists feel more hot than usual. On condition that loacl people in Asian countries are not understand and believe it not appropriate for their countries, Western of tourists will not to come to visit in there. In conclusion, this essay discussed both point of view and my own belief that both of local people and tourist should understand with each another and balance local cultural with new cultural.
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should follow host customs and behavior while
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other
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people
argue that host
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country
should open mind to welcome
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differences
of
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cultural
. This essay will discuss both point of view and my personal opinion.

On the one side of the argument, there are
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local
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people
who are the opinion that visitors should bland with
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local
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people
and learning
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good
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local
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cultural
. The most reason why someone should travel in
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other
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countries
is seeing and learning
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difference
life in
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difference
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. The best way to learn
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life is follow the
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and bland
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On the
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side of this argument,
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argue
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the fact that hosting
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should open mind in
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culturals
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suggest that
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believes are not
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for example
Western of
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always ware shorts when they
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to Asian
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countries
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of the
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weather. There is a hot weather in Asian
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,
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to, Western
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have
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weather that will
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when Western of
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feel more hot than usual. On condition that
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loacl
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in Asian
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are not
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understand
and believe it not appropriate for their
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, Western of
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will not to
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to visit in there.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed both point of view and my
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belief that both of
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and
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should understand with each another and balance
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with new
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.
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IELTS essay discuss both point of view and my personal opinion

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4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
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